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The Girl in the Canoe

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Summary

Amid the chaos of the Cayuse Indian War in 1849 Oregon Territory, the British Moure family find themselves stranded on the wrong side of the new American border. As the king’s men withdraw and American settlers surge west, the Moures—now isolated and destitute—face a future without protection or prospects. Only one British gentleman remains—Sir Charles Winston, young, wealthy, and refined in a land that is anything but. The five spirited Moure sisters are compelled to vie for his favor, knowing only one can win him. Proud and headstrong, Shawnee soon finds herself out of contention. Caught in the war and at risk of being sold by the vile Captain Meredith, Shawnee must fight not only for herself but for her sisters’ future. Enter Thomas Bodeen, a daring American mercenary, haunted by a violent past. Skipper of the Black Dragon, he runs the Cayuse river blockade for profit. When their paths collide, pride and passion ignite, their meeting becomes the most dangerous fire of all in a land ruled by only one commodity—gold.

Status
Complete
Chapters
135
Rating
5.0 (7 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Oregon Territory 1849

“I’ll take all the shovels you’ve got!”

Rainwater ran off the sailor’s sopping oilskin slicker.

A black‑twill cap shadowed his eyes.

He stood in the doorway of Oregon City’s general store. A rare sight among Willamette Valley wheat farmers, he stepped in from the downpour.

Leaving a trail of muddy boot prints on the pinewood plank floor.

At the store’s counter, an elderly gentleman paused in casual banter with a customer to eye the stranger. His brows lifted a fraction.

Behind him and to the left stood a broad-shouldered woman, older, her long black hair streaked with gray and braided at the nape. A worn shawl draped her shoulders, dark, sharp eyes set beneath a lined brow, watchful and busy.

The shock of white hair adorning the watching gentleman’s head identified the renowned proprietor, Dr. John McLoughlin.

The Indians called him John Pee‑kin—the White‑Headed Eagle of the Whites.

His establishment bore the reputation as the ‘last stop on the Oregon Trail.’

Tom Bodeen had journeyed here all the way up from California, determined to negotiate a deal with this venerable figure.

And the woman? Likely Marguerite McLoughlin herself—John’s wife, and by most accounts, sharper than any blade behind that counter.

Confidently, Tom traversed the creaking planks, taking in the scent of freshly cut lumber mixed with the aroma of roasted coffee grounds, in the rustic atmosphere.

As he passed by the lantern oil and dry goods, Tom’s attention remained fixated on the prize; a picket line of shovels propped against a log wall.

McLoughlin followed his gaze to the shovels.

Tom tipped his hat.“I hear you’ve got the best shovels west of the Mississippi,” he said. McLoughlin didn’t waste a breath. “And what have you brought to trade for them, sir?”Tom leaned into the counter. “British trade goods fresh from Vancouver’s Island—enough to make it worth your while.”

“Did they provide you with your cargo list?” John’s eyes rested on his inventory ledgers, while thumbing through them.

“They did. They were well-acquainted with your needs,” Tom assured him. “And I’m sure you’ll find my prices as charming as my company.”

“And does it include Hudson Bay flour?”

“It most certainly does. I always aim to bring a little bit of the best from every corner I visit.”

John finally looked up from his ledger.

“Then we have a deal. But I am curious, how much duty did you pay on that flour?”

Tom responded with a shrug. “Nothing.”

McLoughlin’s quill stilled mid‑stroke.

“Nothing? Pray tell, how did you accomplish that?”

“Oh, I simply raised the stars and stripes and sailed right on by U.S. Customs at Astoria. As an American, I am not obliged to stop.”

“Except when carrying Hudson Bay flour,” John admonished him in reminder.

Tom smiled with a hint of amusement, then leaned in slightly, his voice taking on a more confidential tone. “People keep telling me that,” he shared. “But somehow, I always manage to forget.”

“You’re a smuggler, aren’t you?” John’s gaze returned to his ledger, searching for yet another page while dipping his quill pen.

The bearded man squinted at Tom.

“Some might call it that. I prefer to think of it as finding opportunities where others see obstacles.”

“Have any notion of the sum you saved in duties?”

“I’m afraid not, why do you ask?”

“Each time the Hudson Bay Company’s supply ship docks at Astoria, it pays $24,000 in U.S. taxes. I should know—I ran their trading post for over two decades.”

“Well, perhaps the company’s vessel ought to consider not stopping there then?”

“Not my decision anymore,” John replied, stepping away from the counter to count his inventory of flour sacks. “Don’t worry, I’ll still give you a good price for that flour.”

“Put me down for some of that flour,” the other man quickly spoke up.

“Already did,” John told him, coming back. “So, how’d you manage to navigate the river’s current?”

“I have a bateau,” Tom responded of his shallow bottomed sailboat.

“She must be mighty swift to sail upstream.”

“She’s the fastest there is,” Tom boasted.

McLoughlin eyed him with no response to the claim.

“If you don’t mind my asking,” he inquired; his curiosity evidently piqued, “how much cargo does she carry?”

Tom sensed an underlying interest. “Four tons. That’s her current load. From here, I’m headed to Fort Vancouver to sell the rest.”

“I see. And do you plan on purchasing their shovels as well?”

Tom nodded.

“To sell them in California?”

“Yes, indeed. There are a lot of gold miners eagerly awaiting them down there.”

Marguerite’s voice cut in, with the edge of someone who remembered too much.

“Plenty of men went south chasing gold like dogs after bones. Left their native wives behind to plant wheat and bury children.”

Tom absorbed that.

John interrupted the moment. “Figure you’ll sell those shovels for quite a profit, do you?”

Tom nodded once. “That is my intention.”

“You’re Tom Bodeen, aren’t you?”

“You know me?”

“Heard of you. John said, already marking his ledger. “A man who never lies. Handsome devil too. Tell me, sir, what compels you to venture here?”

Tom gave a half‑shrug. “Like everyone else, money.”

“No,” John dryly observed, still writing. “You’re not like everyone else. They’re buying shovels. You’re selling them.”

“I suppose.”

Like the majority who ventured to this untamed land, Tom desired wealth. However, he had no intention of gambling on striking gold when the odds were mostly just holes in the ground.

“No supposing about it. You are,” John affirmed, stepping around Tom to count the shovels displayed on the wall. “You didn’t come out here to search for gold.”

“No, sir. I plan to make my fortune carrying freight,” Tom said.

He wasn’t here to gamble with a pickaxe—he meant to profit off those who did.

“What other cargo do you plan on transporting back? We don’t have four tons of shovels.”

“I notice you have an abundance of lumber,” Tom pointed out.

“You have a keen eye, sir. Indeed, we do. But suppose I told you how you could make tenfold the profit you would on those shovels. Would you be interested?”

The offer, coming from the most respected man in Oregon Territory, caught Tom’s attention. “Well... I suppose I’d hear you out. Seeing as I’ve come all this way.”

“There’s more money to be made hauling freight here than in California. Your boat is too small to carry enough lumber. In the last six years, we’ve only had a total of seven ships arrive. Yet this year alone, we have scheduled fifty from California, all willing to pay any price for grain and lumber. They’ll put you out of business in one trip. Captain Emory’s brig is already on the way here and able to carry more cargo than you can manage.”

“Well, I had sort hoped to beat them to the punch, Emory included,” Tom responded. “But supposing I didn’t. What do you propose?”

Marguerite sniffed, as if it were an old story to her, folding canvass.

“You men are always hoping. And it’s always someone else gets to pay the price.”

Tom looked over at her, noticing she moved like someone who’d heard too many promises and trusted only results. And wasn’t convinced he’d be any different.

John returned to the counter, running a finger down his ledger page. “Take your boat up the Columbia River for a load of produce,” he suggested. “Be one of the one’s selling grain to those ships.”

“Upstream?” Tom scoffed, shaking his head at the mere suggestion. “Have you forgotten there’s an Indian war going on up there? I had planned on keeping my scalp. I’ve grown rather attached to it. I’m just passing through. Not getting involved. Besides, there’s no Indian war in California.”

“Heard about the war, did you?”

“Everyone has. It’s the talk of California.” Tom showed his understanding. “Some wagon train on the Oregon Trail came down with measles and diverted north for Dr. Marcus Whitman’s Mission.”

His eyes met the other customer for confirmation and whose head bobbed in ready agreement with his facts.

Encouraged,Tom continued. “They spread it to the Cayuse wives of the Hudson Bay Company’s employees at Frenchtown.”

“You’ve heard correctly,” the bearded customer spoke up. “Half the Cayuse women died, nearly all the children.” His missing front tooth showed. “So the Cayuse struck back—killed Marcus Whitman, his wife, and all the men with the wagon train. Ransomed the rest.”

“I believe they called it the ‘Whitman Massacre,’” Tom recalled.

“Hostilities ceased over a year ago,” John informed him, completing the order. “I want a sack of flour for each shovel.”

“Agreed!” Tom confirmed, shaking hands on the deal before inquiring further with skepticism, “So you’re saying the fighting’s stopped? What about the measles? The outbreak and the massacre? Those were no small matters.”

“Ended just a month later,” John confirmed.

That perked Tom’s interest. “You’re suggesting it’s safe to venture up there?”

“It should be,” John confirmed.

“Suppose I undertake this journey. Will I be transporting the same cargo I have now?”

“Yes, the very same. Except for the flour—that stays here,” John explained, making his ledger entries as he spoke, “Think about it,” he said, still writing. “You’ll deliver your cargo to the Hudson Bay Company’s forts upriver, get paid, then take your profit and buy all the produce up there you can to haul back to Astoria to sell to those ships from California.”

“And you claim,” Tom asked, inviting to be convinced, “I’ll earn ten times what I can make on these shovels? Because I’m pretty sure I can earn quite a lot on them.”

“You can. But you can earn better.”

Tom leaned in closer, cautiously optimistic. The conversation had shifted from shovels to much grander possibilities. He wanted to hear more.

“I’m intrigued, but isn’t the Oregon Trail impassable due to the warring Indians? I don’t want to be another cautionary tale of those killed.”

“The trail is blocked, but you can bypass it with your boat by taking the river,” John said. “I’ve got a chart you can use.”

He went out back and brought it forth to roll it out before him.

Tom took a close perusal of it, admittedly impressed at how good it was. “Someone went to a lot of trouble to make this,” he noted with a whistle of admiration for it. “It must have cost you a fortune.”

The good doctor eyed him without answering, waiting on his decision.

Marguerite crossed her arms.

Tom weighed the chart like a man who’d survived worse odds. He was visibly tempted. Yet had his doubts. It was the sort of offer that made a man pause, though he’d never let it show.

But then he shook his head. “No. I’ll stick with California. The man who sold you this did so for good reason—if he tried using it himself, the natives would kill him on the river.”

“He sold it because his bateau’s too slow to get past their canoes. Yours isn’t.”

The settler snorted. “Sure safer than using the Oregon Trail. Colonel Gilliam took a whole militia up it and got himself killed. Rest of ’em come running back here like dogs with their tails between their legs.”

John didn’t blink. “If the natives concern you, we stopped selling them gunpowder a year ago.”

Tom’s eyes went back to the chart, measuring danger the way others measure lumber.

John pressed on. “You can almost name your price. Salem will pay six dollars for a bushel of wheat you’ll pay eighty cents for. Paid in gold.”

Tom leaned in and let out a low whistle—the kind a man gives when profit outweighs good sense.

“And let me show you something, something Gilliam’s men didn’t have then.”

He again went into the back of his store to return with a surprising item and set it down on the counter in front of Tom. “Do you recognize what this is?”

Tom did. They had only just come out. His gaze lingered on it, the gleam of dollar signs already registering in his eyes.

“Do you mind if I look it over?” he asked.

“No. Go right ahead! It’s yours if you want. It comes with the chart.”

Marguerite looked on, said nothing, but raised a disapproving eyebrow—the kind that said she’d already seen how this story ends...

Tom picked it up if only for the privilege of its inspection, the story of Colonel Gilliam’s gruesome end still on his mind. Yet this opportunity promised a different fate.

He traced the textured surface of the linseed oil finished wood, admiring the workmanship and design. This was a tempting offer. When the odds are against you, always put them in your favor, and the good doctor had just done so.

“I get both?”

“You get both.”

“And you’re sure the Indians don’t have gunpowder?” Tom asked.

“Not for over a year.”

Tom searched the settler’s face. No disagreement.

“How much?” he asked.

“I’ll make you a deal,” John offered. “That, and this chart, no charge, for a share of your profits.”

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This has the feel of an unvarnished, compelling frontier story! I wonder if Shawnee and Tom meet early on in the narrative or much later.

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Btw I also want to discuss something about your story if you able!!?

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Hello! I stumbled upon your story today and really enjoyed it. The emotional moments felt natural and easy to connect with. Wishing you all the best with your writing I’ll definitely be following along.

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