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Maxwell has been accidentally captured!…

"Maxwell is given control of his city for a week, but then he gets kidnapped even though his father was supposed to be the one who got captured. A dog who he rescued is able to sound the alarm though, and so help may be on the way! Will Maxwell either escape or be rescued? And what is his future in regards to the city that he’s been given control of for a week (and in regards to an important secret about himself that has not yet been revealed to him)? I’ve finished the first 6 chapters of this book so far, and it’s got lots of hilarious humor, some good heartwarming moments, very clever characters, and an intriguing plot. I highly recommend this story, and I look forward to reading the rest of it!…"

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Max!

"Lol what a fun story! It was creative and fun! Lol Poor Max tho I don't think he learned a thing lol. The style was a bit strange to me but it fit the tone of this story. Max was a great character lol but I loved Pawrrun and Dusty the most! Good story! "

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Intriguing!

"I'm enjoying it so far, it's compelling, well-written, even though it's not grammatically correct (I think it's just the author's writing style). I am really excited to see how this goes, and the character arc for the MC. The best of luck! "

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