What is your opinion?
Appreciation and Comission Request
"I’m Mia, a professional comic artist passionate about capturing the essence of your story through vivid illustrations. Let’s create something unforgettable! Discord: mia2436922 Instagram: bell_a25885 "
First Born Son
"The plot of the story is good... with a different twist. I like the story as it is an original concept and idea. But there are so many grammatical errors like the use of will and well, to and too, except and accept and many others."
First Born Son
"Loved the story from start to finish. There were some typographical errors and some grammar issues that can be easily fixed. The story was quite original and kept one on edge. There is a need for a rewrite to fix some issues here but over all worth read. Enjoyed it. Great job."
Good story
"Good story. Intriguing and interesting. However author should tone his writing style. 'Except' s used in place of 'Accept' throughout the story. The term 'not a happy smile, but that of deceit and betrayal' is a good touch, but its frequent and repeated use does not improve the quality of story, but makes it irritating."
First born son
"We need an editor here. The story has a great concept, and I appreciate the length of the story and the work that takes place by the author to obtain a good lengthy story, long enough for the characters to become familiar friends. My biggest criticism was the portrayal of 40 something year old people as old and weak. I'm gently used at 60. I feel 14 until the look in the mirror!"
