What is your opinion?
Great story
"Amazing love it great concept for a book"
The king
"Ok book, I good but takes a long time to get anywhere. "
The king
"I would recommend this story and books to help with getting into a world that you can picture. Your part of that story. I loved reading this story because it put me into the storylines . I could feel how the main character was feeling by the words I read and shows you that anything could take you into a world different from what you are in as you read. "
The Difference is in the Details
"At a first glance, one may not find much to separate this book from your typical, run-of-the-mill wolf story that seems to be so popular in this platform. However, in every chapter the attentive reader can find small details here and there that give the book a whole new layer of freshness and originality. It's definitely a reward to one's commitment to the read. Moreover, the author's writing style is beautiful, from the way the words sound when I read them in my mind to how eloquently they present the information. This is one of the book's strongest points. Only aspect I'd point out that needs improvement is the way the lack of lore. Though there are some hints here and there, the book seems to be more centered around Eve than anything else. The first chapters of a book are especially ideal to present at least some lore, but for the most part it seems it's all about Eve and the fact that she's suffering —regardless of where this happens— All in all, though, this book (thus far) is definitely worth the read. The writer knows what they're doing, and it's clearly working for them. Keep up the good job, author!"
This is incredibly well done!
"I write my reviews by giving points of what I liked, followed by what I feel can be improved, and then finishing with my final thoughts. Things I liked : 1. The characters are very well fleshed out. They feel complete and real which can be surprisingly difficult to accomplish. 2. Your imagery was incredible. I was able to imagine the scenes as they were laid out with pretty vivid detail! 3. The plot was compelling, and suspenseful this felt rather professional. What can be improved? I only have one note here really which is just that you missed a few letters on some words throughout, and there were a few missing pieces of punctuation. (This is to be expected thoughespecially in a first draft) Final thoughts: This type of story isn't actually something I would typically read (that takes nothing away from this however) I am not a huge fan of werewolves and vampires. That being said this work is amazing I am very highly impressed with the work you have done here! Keep at it this has phenomenal potential! "
The King
"I can honestly say that I'm intrigued to read more. I think my issue is the book can be overly descriptive at times. I'm crazy when it comes to that sort of thing. Most readers love that sort of thing. I tend to get distracted from the plot though. So my apologies. Otherwise I am loving the book so far and can't wait to read more. "
Beautiful imagery
"I love the cliff hanger on the first chapter, and the authors imagery and description work paint a vivid picture that breathe life into her world. It’s only in the beginning stages, so there can’t be much said for the plot, but I look forward to finding out what happens next. :) "
Nice story
"Well written, love the build up and I'm intrigued to find out more "
The King
"Very well written "
And now I’m hooked
"I’m eager to read more ^^"
Makes me want to keep reading.
"I've read the first five chapters, and I'm hooked! I'm interested in what Eve actually is. Overall good grammar and punctuation. The chapters at times seem a little disconnected (sometimes there seem to be details missing from the end of one to the start of another), but I can still keep track of what's going on. Good work!"
I’m not usually in these types of novels, but this
"I’m not usually in these types of novels, but this is amazing. I’m so into this, omg. I just finished the first chapter and I’m already wanting more.🤗"
Good
"I like the main lead. He is honest and kind of lier also at the same time"
