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Beautiful storytelling

"Interesting characters and compelling emotional responses. If you like coming of age, fantastical drama, you will probably love this!"

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Breathtaking

"Astreal cutie😍🥰 I want this novel in movie♥️ Keep it up. Looking forward for the conclusion if that's possible🙏♥️♥️"

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Love it

"Few grammar errors here and there, but still giving you 5 stars as i really enjoyed this book"

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Hell Castle

"Loved the book "

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Hell castle

"I enjoyed reading the dynamics and the connection between family life and the demoniac world but thought the chapters had been done twice because chapter 17 and 18 seemed identical? I might be wrong. But the story is amusing even amazing the thing about the lizard and the dragons and all that and the missing parents and not knowing all is great. But the thing was it is a fairy tale mixed in with the Harry Potter themes and all that. The good thing was it is worth reading and there is too much in it that is good. School family and all that? The thing is when there is nothing but that in the world what do we do as older readers? Is it geared towards youthful readers?"

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amazing

"This story was one that I could not put down! How it was left open, I can't wait to read what comes next."

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AMAZING

"I loved this so much. I would love to read it over and over again. The author did an amazing job at writing this!! Some parts had me almost to tears. I stayed up all night reading this because it was that good. "

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Hell Castle

"This book's unusual story line is what enticed me to read this story of Rori. A half human, half demon girl must decide which of two worlds she belongs in. . . . . To me some of the too long paragraph need to be rewritten with quotation marks in the right place to show when characters are speaking. A new paragraph should be started whenever you switch speakers or thoughts. Also there are several run together words, such as herthoughts, isin, starteddrawing, etc. that needs to be corrected. Also The story did not end well and left readers hanging. I also did not like the fact that Rori cried all the way through the book which made her look like a crybaby and a weakling, instead of a strong willed person. All in all I liked this story and look forward to the next book! NRF"

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Awesome and I need more!

"Very well written in that you can easily see yourself in the story & feel it. I was left hanging at the end so I am excited to read the next book to see what happens next! Please keep me informed & worth publishing!!"

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Wonderful

"Hey,I really love this story It was like I was in the story, the whole story was fantastic but the end was not good... So I really appreciate if you make the part 2...and yeah please tell us when it'll come I really want to know what will happen next..."

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Hell Castle

"I really enjoyed this book it was great story loved it 5STAR I really liked how you can picture yourself in the story and Astreal the dragon how Loki protected Rori"

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Hell castle

"Really enjoyed your story so far, looking forward to seeing more "

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Hell castle

"It really got my attention. Interesting novel. "

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Amazing!!!

"This novel is amazing!!!"

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sequel

"Hi, I really liked your book, but not the ending. So i was wondering if there will be a book 2 or sequel? i really would like to know what is going to happen next."

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U dey craze

"Very interesting 3AM "

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He'll castle

"Sometimes vague and random and the characters were a bit juvenile but at the end it started to gain more depth. I would like to see you develope the characters more in the next book and build the relationship with Rori and her dragon. "

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Interesting

"Interesting "

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