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Very powerful poems/songs that are definitely worth reading!

"I’ve read the first 5 poems/songs in this collection so far, and am really liking them. They confront very difficult experiences and emotions very well, and sometimes all of the hardships in life seem to be winning but other times the yearning for salvation and rising above despite one’s struggles seems to be winning. Poems/songs like this help me to face things that are difficult for me to face, and I really like these poems/songs. I highly recommend reading this collection, and I look forward to reading the rest of it!"

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Poetry

"I love this. I feel every words like they were mine. I will recommend this to everyone so they know everyone has at one time or the other a dark story to tell. "

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"relevance of title: 10/10 theme: 20/20 use of literary devices: 5/10 flow: 10/10 diction and description: 15/20 originality: 12/20 message and impact: 20/20 Short review: I really enjoyed what I read. While the general idea is not very original I loved how relatable it was. The poet has a lot of potentials and I'm glad I read this. Really worth the read. "

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Poetry

"Fantastic poetry--deep, intriguing and emotional. Beautiful work"

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Beautiful

"I usually do not read poetry, but this was beautiful. It was well-written, making me feel the emotions coming through the words as I read them. Great job writer."

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Way with words

"You have a way of words that drew me in, from the first poem. The way you describe your pain and anger throughout these poems and songs allows the reader to understand how you feel. These are very powerful poems and songs. You are doing a great job and should keep the poems and songs coming. It would be great to hear the songs come to life. Poetry is one of the best ways to get your anger and frustration out and you definitely showed that well done! Once again great way with words and keep the poems coming!"

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Touching Poems

"Hope there are more to come. In a world that has gone off the edge the Author hits a note and how a lot of us feel. Like the quick rhymes. Made it easy to read but still felt the depth and emotions of the poem. Two thumbs 👍 👍. "

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What a fabulous book...

"Everything is described in a very marvelous way. These poems definitely convey the pain of the author. I love this book so much as it is what I am relating right now and it helps a lot when you know that there is someone out who is also suffering the pain you are and that you are not alone in this world mourning. It's a great piece of work. Keep it up👍😜"

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Poetry

"I am not good at poems though I like writing Acrostic poems sometimes. I like how the words explain how you feel. Overall the entire thing was excellent."

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Poems

"I don't know much about poetry, but I know it's a great way to express emotions. Maybe this review doesn't carry weight, but I enjoyed the poem. "

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Poetry

"Every poem has it's own glow, beauty and depth. Loved every piece."

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Reflection on Poetry

"Poetry reflection this short poetry collection is deep I love it just feels like you need to be a more of show than tell writer....but truly you talented at 16....I've authored several books but you got a talent little one 😁"

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