What is your opinion?
Really good story
"You’re doing great, author!"
Lovely
"I loved everything about this book as a matter of fact I love fictional characters which includes vampires and werewolves. I would recommend this book to all of my friends and I know that they will enjoy reading this book as well"
Don't remember
"I have no complaints about the book. I love reading this type of book."
Excellent 👌
"I like this book so much"
Cursed love
"An exciting read"
Love the Idea!
"A model? And a mysterious stalker? Sign me up! I love it. I'm still reading, just got through chapter 1 and loved it enough to keep reading. I'll be here for every update dear Author :) "
My Opinion
"I sense steaminess ahead! I like the main character ad how she's described, now the stalker I like his character evn though he is literally a vampire 😭 still love it and I can't wait to see how these two interact further. More people need to be on this story!! Keep up the great work I look foward to more :)"
Xzavier
"Oh this book is great can't put into words can't wait for updates. Where can I find a Xavier for myself lol"
None
"It is an amazing story line. Not something I expected. The writer has developed it well too"
Grammar is a bit trippy sometimes
"Grammar is a bit trippy sometimes"
Xzavier
"When I started reading I was a little nervous. Being an SA survivor I'm always a bit skeptical of stalker-type stories because I'm instantly worried that that kind of behavior is going to be sexualized in a way that's y'know damaging and not good to be sexualized, but this story tows the line very well. It's certainly taboo and dark, but it never goes to a point of sexualizing behavior that would be wrong to sexualize - so good job for keeping that boundary with this kind of subject manor and still keeping the dark theme. The writing in and of itself is really good and well done. Great showing and not telling, the dialogue I found to be especially great. I love that Kelsey and Xzavier and two very distinct voices to show they're different people, that was a very well done. I do think the world-building for the vampire lore maybe needed to be introduced earlier. It's a little confusing and we're only getting a small taste of it when we're a few chapters in and still not really understanding it. I don't think you need to lay all your cards on the table right away, but it takes away from the romance aspect of the plot slightly to be really confused about what's going on with the vampires and at least setting up parts of this world and how vampires work in general (if not his specific story) so we can get our bearings and have some context. Overall, though, this is a really great read and good luck on the rest!"
