What is your opinion?
Great work
"Emotional thriller.. wonderfully written.."
Signed, Sealed..Deliveried
"Gripping, thought provoking, too realistic for comfort..As an ardent fan of forensic shows, true crimes; this story gives another part of the picture.The documentaries mainly focus on the murderer and the victim/s...But this story focuses and gives an insight in the minds of the victim's family; the after effects of the crime namely despair, guilt, alcoholism, divorce suicide..But what redeems the book and gives a sense of purpose, is when the family moves beyond all that and take action. In some cases, pressure groups are formed; for examples Moms Against Drunk Driving MADD but in this case, revenge is planned and executed flawlessly with the aid of interested parties who want to right a wrong and see justice done...This book is also a sad and telling commentary of the corruption that underscores many of these Human Rights organizations and persons involved in them; no rights for victims and their families, no true regard for law, order,decency and natural justice..All in all, a very potent book👍👍👍👍"
Brilliant!
"I loved this story from beginning to end. I don't think I have ever read anything quite like it before. I totally got caught up in Tom's mission. I loved the meticulous details that he went through to find the twins. Then his woman gives him the best idea. I giggled and thought, "yup, just like a woman." I was quite shocked to find out that Tom as careful as he was to keep to himself, he was being watched the whole time. I know the story is about Tom and Sacha finding the twins, but I would have liked to see the relationship between the twins and thier mother. The paragraphs are way too long. They need to be broken up into smaller paragraphs so it is easier to read. Also I noticed that you started the beginning of a sentence with a number instead of being written out. When number are at the beginning of a sentence, they should always be spelled out. Twelve, and not 12. The ellipsis is three dots, if that was your intention. Other than that, this is some good stuff here, I can't wait for more!"
Very nice package.
"Great hook at the start, the blurb, the mini blurb, the chapter titles, the title of the story. It's a very neat well presented package, it makes a very good first impression. I like the way the stories unravelling, short snippets of information, we're getting it just as the main character gets it. You don't dwell too long on his grief which I like, a lot of stories like this lay it on way too thick at the start when you'd more than likely be too in shock to feel grief at that point. It wouldn't be totally real at that point. I liked the case, sort of a take on the Venibles murder but with a twist. The prologue makes you think there's more too it as well the fact it seems open and shut from the start. Obviously there's some kind of mystery unravelling and it does pull you in, makes you want to know more. Which is exactly what it should be doing. The writing style is very confident, not trying to hard, flows well, very relaxed. The only criticisms I have are that you have these big block paragraphs, just huge blocks of texts. It would be a lot easier to read if you broke them up a little. Other than that I can't fault it, it's a solid story."
We were swan
"Interesting story"
we were swans
"I'd like the book already it's a sad sad thing that happened to Evelyn I took money from the twins father OMG what a miracle let's see what happens next"
