What is your opinion?
A Very Misleading Diary
"It was quite the story. Well written and creative."
Dang
"I am now checking around me thanks sigh night terrors for sure "
Disturbing!
"I really don't know what to say. The story starts off as weird, and in the end turns into something totally brazen and unexpected. There is a lot of truth in what Sidra alleges, about how we "glorify the strange" and "disturb things that are best left alone". It seems like a well-deserved slap in the face, to be honest. But I happen to disagree with Sidra, we only read such stories because they appeal to us on an instinctual level. To each his own story. The grammar and punctuation are immaculate, and the transition from Alexander to Sidra very well done. Alexander's sentences lost their grammar and structure, while Sidra's grew in length. As for Alexander's story, it doesn't make much sense in the end. He is gradually slipping into paranoia yes but it seems to be for naught. What exactly is he so afraid of? He buys a gun and prepares for death on January 21 but this is so removed from the previous entries which only indicate the two supernatural beings and their apparent casual demeanour. The change seems too sudden. Yet there is a lot of potential, and a lot of things worthy of praise. The snarky comments Alexander makes while recounting Sidra and Valerian's conversation, the relevance of the story to the importance of art, and the description of Sidra's apparel are all marvellous. Keep up the good work!"
