Creatures Who Smile by corey at Inkitt
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Creatures Who Smile

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Summary

A loving couple adopts a child of their own to raise and as the child gets older he realizes that his loving mother and father are not what he thought they were. A twisted short story of a loving family that had major issues of their own and want to inherit there practice to another.

Genre
Horror/Mystery
Author
corey
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Is This the One

Creatures Who Smile

It was the eyes that attracted her to the boy, yes, the eyes. The eyes held the mysteries of the ancients. She and her husband have been searching for such a thing for a long time with no success. So it was here all this while. She looked at her husband and he looked back at her, there was understanding. It was sort of telepathic understanding. The one people couldn’t see but it existed in their minds – it was transcendental. This bond between them was born on the day they first celebrated ‘the passing of souls’ together. She beckoned on the fat woman standing at one end of the room. The woman walked faster than her legs could carry her. She whispered something to the fat woman and pointed to the boy. The smile on the fat woman’s face vanished as she laid her eyes on the boy. The fat woman tried to convince her to change her mind, but she won’t have any of it. She wanted the boy and that was the end of the matter. The fat woman turned and commanded the children to go back to their rooms and asked the boy to stay behind. There was a short gasp of surprise from some of the children when they realized the couple were interested in the boy and not them – well-mannered and cultured children they were.


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Shocking

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Good Writing

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Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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