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The dark noble awesome

"Amazing story. I’m waiting for book 2"

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great book

"this book is a must read. the plot twist had me flabbergasted and the emotional moments were great. if you’re looking for a good book with enough romance and a happy ending. read this. 5 stars. "

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The Dark Noble

"An awesome story! Loved every bit of it!"

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The Dark Noble

"What a wonderful and exciting story. Love the characters and story development. "

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The Dark Noble

"This is the first time am rating a book any book at all i really love this story, everything about this story is perfect apart from some spelling mistake which i know because the story is yet to be edited but overall the story is a very nice one. "

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Loved it

"Enjoyed reading the book."

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THE DARK NOBLE

"Great fantasy story. Full of intrigue, drama and intense love that withstands time"

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Review Of The Dark Noble

""The Dark Noble" is an enthralling tale of mystery and forbidden romance. The protagonist, with a hidden past, finds herself entangled in strange occurrences at an elite manor, all while capturing the suspicious attention of the enigmatic Dark Lord. The magnetic pull between them defies reason, creating a tension that is both captivating and unsettling. The narrative expertly weaves together elements of suspense and emotion, exploring the complexities of attraction and the unknown. With its rich characters and intriguing plot, "The Dark Noble" is a compelling read that keeps you hooked from start to finish. A must-read for fans of dark romance and mystery."

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Hooked

"I love the suspense and the characters. I'll keep reading."

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The Dark Nobel

"Amazing story. Need a book 2"

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Very good

"This is a very good novel. It's so beautiful and dark in the same time. "

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I loved it I read it fully and the book is amazing

"I read the book fully and I love Jarosh character and I hope he remembers who is mother is, as the young boy is quite a character and he is so funny and cute. The way you use great description in the book makes the story come alive and that’s amazing it’s not easy to do that but you did it and I just love your writing style. Everything was amazing I can’t wait for more chapters you will provide. Great work "

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The Dark Noble

"I'll admit, I wasn't sure at first but I ended up really enjoying this story! I fell in love with the characters and needed to read more about them! I thought the plot was very intriguing and creative. I'm glad I gave this a chance because it kept me interested and I thought it was a great read. "

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The dark noble

"This book has been on my reading list for a while, and I just have to say that I wish I had started it sooner. I've devoured the 16 chapters published so far and I can't wait for more to be released. The plot is captivating, as is Kamora's story. It's not the kind of story that creates suspense about the characters and who they are; In the first few chapters you can deduce where the story is going. But that doesn't take away the mystery behind the story of the main characters. On the other hand, you wanna read more and more."

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Mystery and Romance

"Interesting plot and great character development. Overall the story is engaging and well written. I really like the story so far. Can't wait to read future chapters. If you enjoy fae with a touch of mystery, this is for you."

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Interesting

"I love dark stories and this story promises a dark journey,I can sense a dark romence between Mora and the dark lord,i love the author's writting skills"

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"I really enjoyed all the chapters, the ending always kept me wanting to know more. I can honestly say my favorite character is the young lord. The love for food is universal even with the young lord and it was so it adorable reading the interaction between Mora and him. The description and imagery of the story was written so well. Overall, Great story, can't wait for the next chapter!"

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Great story

"3 chapters in and great! Loved it so much detail and such great descriptions of everything. Loved it can’t wait to continue reading "

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Amazing

"This seems like a slow burn to me I love how you describe each scene the chapters just keeps you coming back for more"

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Great plot, great characters!

"I'm not strictly a fantasy fan, yet this story very much intrigued me. The writer has excellent skills in attracting the reader. I felt compelled to read on after every chapter. The writing is very smooth, easy to follow and there are some beautiful paragraphs. I enjoyed setting descriptions, which easily evoked the image of the mysterious manor. Quite immediately one relates to the main heroine. Kamora is an intriguing character, simple and kind at first sight, but mysterious in her loss of memory. One can feel her past lurking and wants to know about it as much as Kamora does. The characterization is superb with very good, naturally flowing dialogues and interactions. Another character that is portrayed really well is the fascinating fae lord of the manor. He's very charming in his detached, cold attitude - also portrayed very well. There's a very original premise that has to do with the loss of memory - this and yet unclear connection between Kamora and the manor and its master makes the plot extremely compelling. The one thing I'd suggest to the writer to be careful about is about choosing the POV. Seems the main one is of Kamora, but in one chapter it suddenly changes. Whatever way the writer chooses to tell the story - from one or more POV, it should be consistent throughout the story. In overall, it's an intriguing, well written story,with some really great characters and a plot that compels you to read on."

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