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ZORRO-THE CHOSEN ULTIMATE

Summary

You "Zorro", you are our redeemer,the one who will bring peace to this world

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 I took to my heels

It was a cold winter night when I was going home after attending a friend's birthday party. I had a feeling that I was being followed, when i was on my way home after the party on the streets of New York, i cross-checked and find no one.



Infact, i wasn't afraid that much because I've been having this feeling at age seven(7), but suddenly, at an incredible speed, a dark image zoom past me. It was as if he wanted to let me know his presence. Did i say "his"? I was totally wrong, because what i saw after the dark image stopped was a stunning beautiful woman.



She wasn't alone, she was accompanied by three men, they were dressed like army personnels. One of them removed a pistol from his hostler and what came to my mind was "run, run run for my dear life". I took to my heels and surprisingly none of them came after me, instead they were grinning at each other.


I ran for almost an hour and stopped when I was certain that I'm out of sight and danger to catch my breath.


But .......... I was totally wrong, because I raised my head and what i saw was the four of the army like people as if they have appear out of tin air.

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