What is your opinion?
Can't remember
"Very good!!"
Outstanding as Vampire stories go
"I liked the characters. The plot was really out of the common way. Interesting twists and a satisfying ending. The main female character made me want to tear my hair out several times. Good, good story. Thank you to the author."
The boy from Romania
"Wonderful story wish there was a part 2"
Getting better
"At first I couldn't understand why Luminita was so wishy washy, but I'm getting happier with the events that are unfolding"
Very very good
"Very mice story to rrwad and enjoy , thanks for the tim eto wright , i really enjoyed it"
Not your typical vampire story
"Overall it was very well written! The plot moved well, and although the female lead was indecisive to the point of being annoying, it didn't seem implausible nor did it deter me from finishing the book. There were a few typos here and there, but overall good grammar that's easily read. I think most people would be more upset to find out their parents had lied about so much, but hey, it's fantasy and it felt nice to read it! "
Vampire prince & princess
"Phenomenal book! Author did a phenomenal job with characters, plot, the ups & down decision of becoming a vampire, & the unconditional love between Daniel & Elisabeth/ Luminita."
The Boy from Romania
"Nice story! The Elisabeth character was a little too confused and stupid for her age though. :) "
Excellent story...needs editing
"This story was a wonderful tale. I thoroughly enjoyed the tapestry painted by the author. It definitely needs editing, though. There were a lot of grammatical errors, but what was most disrupting to the flow was change of tense early on. That did get better further into the story. There are a few places where things ideas are glossed over a little too quickly. In addition, there are concepts that are almost unbelievable. Most people wouldn't accept the idea of vampires being real. There's simply no way. Even Elisabeth accepted it too quickly, and I'm not even going to talk about Gigi. Great character there, by the way. Her parents quick acceptance should have set off alarms for Elisabeth. Sure, they argued that vampires weren't real, but they didn't really seem phased by the idea. As a reader, that bothered me. You should always try to avoid anything that makes the reader pause. When they pause, you're in danger of losing them, and if the pause too many times, you will. Before you publish, you should have a few select readers go over it and tell you what's wrong with it. They can be friends or family, but make sure they're honest with you and be willing to accept the feedback. You can't improve without that criticism, so long as it's constructive. Overall, it was a great story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Good work! Now, clean it up."
