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Gilded captive heart

"Aww another good love story. Well done 👍 "

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Interesting plot

"So far this story has kept me hooked! It is very interesting, and filled with adventures. For someone that isn't really into alien romance, I must say that this book is written well enough for me to keep reading it."

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Love it!

"This story has an interesting and unique concept. Love the three brothers. Great book. I want to read more. 👍"

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Too rushed

"The plot was ok but the story was too rushed. Failed to give enough explanations. There was a lack of imagination. "

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Thoroughly Let Down

"This story just went lacking, deeply. The main character spends all this time contemplating like she's been there for months when its only been a day or two. Bizarre. It just comes off so rushed and disjointed. Lacks substance and numerous grammatical errors. I lost all interest by chapter 19"

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Gilded Captive Heart

"The story is superficial because it lacks much needed details and descriptions. The narrative feels distant; it needs more first-person insight and authentic character conversations. I gave up reading after 25 chapters. The minimalist style of writing doesn't work for this piece. It was disappointing compared to the other stories I've read by the same author. "

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