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Whispers of the Night: Amy and the Alpha’s

"Delightful story of how love and family can concur all"

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Great start

"Excellent start to a promising story. It has exceptional descriptive language. I do think the two chapters could be made into three, maybe a middle chapter diving more into the academic investigation details. Just a thought. Overall, it's an incredible beginning, especially for a young and new writer. This writer has a very promising career ahead of her. Well done!!! "

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