What is your opinion?
Intense
"This story holds you from the beginning. You feel like you are in the storm. I know it is a short story but it is so good that I want more!!! "
GRIPPING!
"This book is like a rollercoaster of emotions! Picture this: a girl freezing in the cold, and her friend going all out to save her—it's friendship goals at its finest! The author's writing skills are seriously top-notch, pulling me into the story like a magnet. And can we talk about the descriptions? So vivid, I could practically feel the chill! I'm totally loving this story—it's just too good to put down! ❄️📚✨"
The writer has a future in animation
"Boy, this was quite the short story. It was simple about someone in danger of getting frozen, and yet it was very functional. Maybe if the author keeps review swapping, and recieving the mails from Inkitt send to the writer, and does some modifications, maybe she will get more well known. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to what animations you will create in the future!"
Amazing scenery and descriptions
"FROZEN is a great story! Just by reading a chapter, I can tell it'll go a long way. What I admire is how the author didn't focus more on character description like majority (which isn't bad), instead the author focuses on creating an intriguing scene; using the scenes to convey certain informations about how they look (the kind of creatures they are). Already, I like the character Cless; his determination is something I admire. The plot is amazing, would love to see how it goes for Cless and his friends!!! "
Nikki's Review
"An intense and emotional scene beautifully crafted by Yvi. The freezing storm is described with such detail that it immerses the reader in the desperation of the situation. Yvi's writing effectively conveys the characters' emotions, creating an engaging experience for the reader."
Frozen
""The Storm" is a captivating and emotionally charged narrative that immerses the reader in a frozen world of suspense and mystery. The plot unfolds seamlessly, introducing a unique concept of a manmade storm with consequences that are both chilling and intriguing. The revelation about the characters slipping into a frozen coma and losing their memories adds a layer of complexity to the story, leaving readers eager to explore the mystery behind the mastermind. The character development is commendable, particularly in the portrayal of Cless and Cartoon. Their distinct personalities shine through in their actions and dialogue, contributing to a well-rounded dynamic. Cless's determination to save Yvi and Cartoon's pragmatic approach create a tension that resonates emotionally with the reader. The story structure is well-crafted, with a balance of action, emotion, and mystery. The pacing keeps the tension high, making it a page-turner from start to finish. Descriptive language is effectively used to create vivid imagery, especially in moments like Yvi's struggle and her final interaction with Cless. One aspect that could be further enhanced is the exploration of the manmade storm's origins and the motives behind it. Providing more context and backstory could add depth to the narrative and increase the reader's investment in the overarching plot. In terms of writing style, consider experimenting with varied sentence lengths to maintain a dynamic flow. This can help create a more immersive reading experience. Overall, "The Storm" is a strong piece with great potential. By delving deeper into the origins of the storm and fine-tuning the writing style, the story has the opportunity to become an even more compelling and immersive experience for readers. "
