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The story is about the life of a girl named Rose who from one minute she goes from a normal everyday university student to someone with a background that has been even kept secret from her.She is a warrior.
There once was a girl named Rose she was the kindest person in the world she always helped others and never thought about herself. But the day had come, it was creeping closer,the day where she would choose herself or the world.The day shed become the villain or the hero of her own story,her survival is in your hands....continue reading and she might survive..
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Hello I am the writer of this book you see I am new at writing so pls tell me how you like it and if I did any mistakes
Hii, Kmwolfg_. Firstly The introduction of Rose is intriguing, and it's clear that there's more to her than meets the eye. Then Overall, the grammar is decent, but there are a few areas where it could be refined. For instance, in the sentence "But as we all know when people are this kind usually something terrifying is hidden behind that mask," consider breaking it into two sentences for clarity. Additionally, watch out for punctuation and sentence structure to ensure a smooth flow. Character Development:
While Rose's kindness and internal struggle are evident, consider delving into more specific details about her personality, background, and experiences. This will make her more relatable and three-dimensional for the readers. Descriptive Language:
Adding vivid descriptions can make the narrative more immersive. Try to paint a clearer picture of Rose, her surroundings, and the emotions she experiences. This will help readers better visualize the story and empathize with the character.
Dialogue:
Integrating dialogue can bring the characters to life and advance the plot. Consider incorporating conversations between Rose and other characters to reveal more about her and move the story forward.
Pacing:
Ensure a balance in pacing. Don't rush through important moments; allow the narrative to breathe, especially when exploring Rose's internal thoughts and emotions. Conversely, keep the story moving forward to maintain the reader's interest. Overall, it's a solid start with great potential!