What is your opinion?
Touching.
"It may be short but the feeling for the characters leaps out of the page. Richard has again managed to pack massive amounts of information into the story. Well done and keep it up. If you have the time dear reader please read Richards' other pieces."
A Good Story, As Usual
"This is what I could expect from you :) Though I already knew the source of the smell the moment I read what the husband was doing, it was still interesting how you would end the story. I just hope the other readers also understand what the smell was, because you made it kind of unclear there. Well, I'm surely going to read your other stories :) Regards, Kei Angelus"
Good but could be extended
"I see potential for this story. However, I did notice a couple of things. The length is short, I think that the story ended quite suddenly. I was hoping for the story to branch out more so I think that the author could make the story longer. I think the plot was a little under developed. I wanted to see some more things happening to the husband and wife. No problems with the author's writing style, he sets the scene well and the technical side was great. If longer and plot more developed, I would give the story 5 stars."
