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When Christmas Comes Around

Summary

Is there anything better to do than glide across the ice? Can you do this with your friends? Is there anything better for young people to do than "crack the whip?" Should they be careful not to get dizzy? Is there anything better to do than photograph pine trees the Supreme Being has painted with snow? Does he paint them like thick frosting on on a cake? Is it a mistake?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

When Christmas comes around,

What better thing to do than glide across the ice?

Do this with your friends.

When Christmas comes around,

What better thing for young people to do than play “crack the whip?”

But don’t get dizzy.

When Christmas comes around,

What better thing to do than photograph pine trees the Supreme Being has painted with snow?

They would look great in museums.

When He paints the pine trees with snow,

He paints them like thick white frosting on a cake,

Which is no mistake.


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