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"Kurai and her friends are back!, and they are still not exactly behaving. They steal Kurai’s Mom’s car, and have to divide up driving responsibilities because none of them can reach all of the car’s controls by themselves. Their goal is to do a drive-thru challenge where ten restaurants must be visited and ten meals consumed. The meals are a mystery because you order whatever the person in front of you ordered. Will Foxy, Cheese, and Kurai complete the challenge? Will they crash Suisen’s car due to them not exactly being expert drivers? And what’s going on with Suisen’s belly being bigger? Is that little Kage in there? I’ve only read the first chapter so far, but this story is already providing lots of laughs and lots of entertainment, and I’m excited to find out how the rest of the challenge goes!"

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