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A story of love and tragedy.

"In this story, a happy couple gets some devastating news and has to figure out how to deal with the tragedy that has come their way. I’m 3 chapters into this story so far, and it’s very heartwarming at times and also very sad at times, and it reminds me of how life can have very high highs and very low lows. I highly recommend this book, and I look forward to reading more of it."

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Amazing

"From what I have read so far. This is an amazing book. Great plot and characters. I Will be reading more."

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Good.

"I love the novel so far, characters seems good. Can't wait for next chapters to read"

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Good Start

"Like I said in the chapters, you have a great basis for a story. I encourage you to continue writing and get more into the depth of the story and the scenes. It all looks like great plot points. I dreamed of writing when I was in middle school and it took me into my thirties to write the first complete book. It takes time and dedication, please continue. I look forward to seeing the story blossom into a great work when you continue to write and learn. "

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Promise me love

"This needs a lot of work, your plot is good, but it's missing details. Like when they met, their life together. Your chapters are very short. I think with more input, this could be great. Don't be discouraged, I know you can do it. It's takes time to write a story. Lose yourself in it. Good luck "

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