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I admire the intelligent characters

"The main character, Luz is a relatable character. I like how relatable she is. I like her personality. I admire the intelligence of these two women—Luz and Nalini. Their knowledge of plants amazes me, it draws me to the story. Cool storyline. In addition: I wanted to say that there are some grammatical errors that I am sure if fixed will greatly improve the flow of the story."

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