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Nillium Neems

"From a deep well of imagination springs forth the sunny, upbeat personality of Nillium Neems. As you follow her on her escapades you will find yourself forever smitten🌹"

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Great Book!

"This was such a great book. 😍 It’s not the type of book I normally read but I’m thankful I did 😁 I highly recommend this book, you won’t regret it. This book full of mystery and suspense. I was constantly guessing if it was real or if it was a dream. I was on the edge of my seat and couldn’t put the book down. Also I loved Nil’s quirky, fun, and loving personality. 🥰 Can’t wait to read book 2 😏"

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Naomi

"This is the very first book I've read on inkitt and I can honestly say it's had me gripped all day ! I'm quite hard to please when it comes to it but this is truly the best short story I've read. It's is A Must "

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Exciting

"This story is impossible to put down. I should be working right now, and keep telling myself I'll get back to it after this chapter but I have to know what happens next"

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Strangely unique

"When I started this story, I was sure that I would not enjoy it. How wrong I was! It is such an amazing and thrilling story"

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Melinda

"I really enjoyed reading this. I couldn't put it down for wondering where it would lead "

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Nice

"Its nice and the twist of hooded man dying was good and i guess there will be some alternative for derrik also"

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This story

"Very good. Very odd. Different perspective on schizophrenia "

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The normal girl

"I like how everything is described. I can see everything as if I'm there looking at what she's wrote. "

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Nil

"The book is good so far but iysstart8ng to drag om"

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Loved this story it had a different twist lived the idea the plot everything you are a really talented person

"Love everything about the book. Recommend book to everyone I know "

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Intresting

"Awesome read. Keeps you guessing about weather she's insane or just sees more then anyone else"

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Nillium neems

"I love love love this story so far. Really engrossed, I'm a very slow reader but have flown through this. I have recommended it to a friend who is also really engrossed in it. I haven't read in years and so pleased I chose this as my first one to read to get me back into reading :-) "

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Obsessed

"Everything from your writing technique to your hilarious and thoroughly detailed witty banter was spectacular! I look forward to reading more from you 🙌😍"

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Nillium Neems

"This book is riveting, I just want to keep reading; see what happens next. The puzzle of what's real and what's not is intriguing. Once you think you have it figured out, suddenly a new factor is there and you have to keep reading to rethink and piece together the puzzle again. I love it! "

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Nellium neems

"I thought it was a great plot line. Very creative writing style. A definite cliff hanger."

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HOLY F++K

"OMG!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO GIVE THIS A READ. TWISTS, TURNS, COMPLETLY UNPREDICTABLE. I READ A LOT OF BOOKS, NOVELLAS, SHORT STORIES. BASICALLY I READ A LOT!!!! THIS IS BYFAR THE ABSOLUTE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!!"

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Review

"The thing I like about this book is that the author tries to get us to feel sympathy for Nil and I am sure we all do. I like that the author lets us believe that the things Nil is seeing are real. But even though they are not real we still feel sympathy for her because nobody believes her. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a good thriller type book. I have the book a five star review because it is perfect for the genre that it is "

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Nemesis

"I would tell everyone to read it. It was very good"

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Nillium Neems

"Awesome book love it"

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