What is your opinion?
Very compelling
"This story has a very good plot! I love the names of the kingdoms and the names of the people. I love how the family lives away from all the drama. And I love the siblings relationship. A very good book. I recommend it to anyone."
Not Your Average Tale
"When I first started to read this story, I thought that Adelaide would follow a typical 'rags to riches' story- she was a peasant with little to her name, and a ball was announced by the king- seems like the setup for a Cinderella-esque story, but the story goes in a different direction with war being announced instead, and Adelaide offering herself as a replacement for her brother in the draft. I won't go into more details as I don't want to spoil the plot, as the mystery and the twists and turns are a great part of it, and people should experience it for themselves, but overall a great read. "
Captivating and Very Unique
"My favourite chapter was the first one, as it describes the kingdoms in great detail and I like the original idea of each kingdom being based on a sin/immoral act. I especially enjoyed until chapter 10, but then I felt like the chapters became a bit too short and the narrative flow became more stiff. I agree that this book is a page-turner as it made me want to keep reading to see what happens in the next chapter. I also loved the main character, Adelaide, and her brother. They have very kind and caring personalities, and their brother-sister relationship is heart-warming as they try their best to protect each other. Overall, the grammar and wording is very accurate. I disagree that the book progresses slowly, in fact I think it has a nice pace, and some chapters could be edited to be longer and more descriptive. Looking forward to new chapters!"
A Riveting Tale of Sibling Bonds and Fantastical Worlds!
"From the moment I delved into the world crafted by the author, I was captivated. The attention to detail in the opening chapter drew me in, painting a vivid picture of the seven countries. As someone who cherishes fantasy stories, I found myself utterly immersed in this enchanting realm. One of the most compelling aspects of the narrative is the portrayal of the sibling bond between Adelaide and Henry. Their relationship is nothing short of beautiful, showcasing a deep connection and unwavering loyalty. Adelaide's attachment to her family is wonderful, yet I find myself eagerly anticipating her journey of growth and discovery as she unknown ventures of the real world. There were minor grammatical errors sprinkled throughout the text, but as this author once noted "It is all part of the process." In conclusion, I commend the author for their exceptional work. With each turn of the page, I am filled with anticipation and excitement, eagerly awaiting the next installment of this enthralling tale."
One of the best fantasy stories I have read so far
"I'm absolutely enamored by this fantasy novel! Typically, I shy away from such tales because the world-building can get overly complex, but not with this gem. Each kingdom is uniquely crafted, making it easy to dive into and understand. And the family we follow? They're incredibly well-developed, with each member having their own distinct background, motivations, and aspirations. It's like you're right there, witnessing it all unfold before your eyes. Let's talk about the author's writing style – it's simply brilliant. It flows effortlessly, keeping you hooked with every chapter. I find myself eagerly anticipating what's next for Adelaide in her newfound role. Kudos to the author! Keep up the fantastic work – I can't wait to see what's next!"
Interesting Read
"The story has an interesting narrative, along with interesting characters. The author is doing great work! Can't wait for future chapters!"
Great characters and the start of an epic
"This story seems like it’s big. It’s a strong start the protagonist is likeable and all of the supporting cast help to build out the world. You can tell the narrative is building to something big and that it will take a long time to get there, with a lot of character development and good storytelling along the way. I’m looking forward to the journey. Excellent work!"
Love it
"The book is great and I love the bond between Ade and Hen. They are rvery siblings dream. The only pitfall I have is too long paragraphs. I think if you cut them and give each individual a paragraph when they are talking will improve your novel so much better. Other than that, it is fantastic. Keep writing "
When you procrastinate from reading, read this! It is an easy read!
"The chapters are not long, so it is great for those who want a good and fast-paced novel. I read the whole thing in one hour. I do not know why it says I only read four chapters, because I read all of them. The character relationship between Henry and Adelaide is very interesting and there are great plot twists that I did not see coming. The story is easy to follow, even if one does not read the author's first chapter about worldbuilding. There are issues with missing apostrophes in some of the chapters, but apart from that, it is well-written and easily understandable. It mostly has dialogue, with little description. I cant wait till the battle chapters come out!"
Page turner!!
"The author does an incredible job of describing the kingdoms in the story. The narrative has skillfully woven the strengths and weaknesses of each kingdom into the story, creating a seamless and engaging plot that captivates the reader from beginning to end. The foreshadowing is so well done that the reader can anticipate the outcomes of each kingdom's decisions and actions, adding an element of excitement and anticipation to the story. The characters are depicted exactly as I imagined them, and their relationship is well-developed. I would love to have a brother like Henry!! Honestly, I don't have any critics besides wanting more chapters! Great job, and I can't wait to see what happens next!"
Great read!
"I love fantasy and this book is no exception. Very descriptive writing, just as I like. Good portrayals of characters are one of the factors which make good fantasy books and this story have that. If you love fantasy, you should give this book a try for sure."
Seven deadly kingdoms
""Seven Deadly Kingdoms" presents an intriguing premise, with each kingdom symbolizing one of the seven deadly sins, which adds depth and complexity to the narrative. The first chapter adeptly explores these kingdoms, offering detailed descriptions of their originality and behavioral traits, thus laying a solid foundation for the plot to unfold. Credit is due to the author for their skillful use of descriptive paragraphs and emotionally engaging characterizations. Each character is brought to life with vivid detail, enhancing the reader's immersion into the story world. However, the book does have its shortcomings. Some scenes lack smooth transitions, causing abrupt shifts in narrative flow. For instance, the transition from Henry's encounter with the horses to Adelaide's eerie forest encounter feels disjointed. Nevertheless, these issues are relatively minor and can be easily rectified with careful editing. Overall, the grammar is impeccable, contributing to the overall readability of the text. Despite its flaws, "Seven Deadly Kingdoms" excels in drawing readers into a meticulously crafted fantasy world. I eagerly anticipate how events will unfold in this captivating narrative."
OFFICIALLY A FAN🔥
"HWAAAAA 진짜!!!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!! This is the kind of story that I like in fantasy narrative. Not too rich like Lord of The Rings, not too simple to be mistakenly as teen romance and not too slow and not too fast. And this story has it all!!! The author is seriously talented, she knows how to craft a very engaging beginning and later add small details to build the story as the plot progressed. I love the characters since the first page and I love the world-building in the story. I am enchanted with all the seven kingdoms and I have a feeling it will be a one great of a ride!!! Not only am I intrigued by the plot I am also intriguef by the characters here. The bond that the FL has with her family especially her brother is deeply moving and it seriously makes me jealous cause she has the kind of bonding that I want to have with my siblings 🥹🩵 The writing skills is wonderful, and there is no grammar mistakes as far as I know (though I am not native so I am not that reliable in this). There is a very small and minor capital error in some words, like a word that shouldnt be capitalized but was capitalized but it is SO FINE and did not disturb my reading experience at all! It was still great and I love this story to bits!!! Seriously you SHOULD NOT miss this one up! I guarentee you you will have a great time reading it! Wonderful work author!!!♡ "
Entertaining and sweet
"The detail in which you write this story is so well written. The way you described the surroundings and the people made me think i was really there. I felt a whole roller coaster of emotions in chapter 4 and I was on the edge of my seat dying to find out what happens!! Such an intriguing read, I loved it!"
Great so far!
"I love the way the author describes everything. It makes it pretty easy to picture things. I can't wait to find out what the "big announcement" is!"
Great Fantasy!
"The prologue was a great read and I thought the idea behind the seven kingdoms was very interesting and unique. The characters have clear motivations and goals and they are easy to root for throughout. I enjoyed the sudden twist it was written and handled well and made me feel the emotions with the characters! The world-building was interesting and I only see it going up as the story continues. There were occasionally some repeated words that threw some of the paragraph's flow off, and lots of repeated names that made certain paragraphs feel very bulky, as well a lack of balance on showing over telling but not enough to discredit the positives of the story, which there are lots of! Great story and great work! : ) "
A very Strong Start (15 chapters read so far)
"Becketts are good people, separate and untouched by seven deadly sins represented by the seven kingdoms in a glossary-like prologue. Except, none of those kingdoms really played a big part until much later in the story. I loved the concept, but it wasn't a major part of the narrative until I've read so far. Henry and Adelaide's bond is beautifully depicted, but the journey to the kingdom was a bit bland for my taste, but then I love detailed descriptions. As they're at war (which is the first time it's mentioned during the King's annoucment) all firstborns are to join the army. However, this looming threat does not affect the lives of the MC, their family, or even the population in any impactful way until then. Henry can't, due to an injury, so Adelaide volunteers. From that point, I struggled with the pacing until Adelaide catches the eye of the Queen. As 30 characters have been posted so far, I felt a bulk of the "journey" could be trimmed or needs more emotional resonance from the MC. But the first three chapters were great. The author has the skills (how they depicted the sibling's bond is ample proof) and in my humble opinion, a spruce up of the draft (especially ch 5 to 14) will make a good story even better. "
