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Graveyard Shift

"Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed following Alex's journey. The characters were compelling, and the way the author built tension throughout kept me turning the pages. The cemetery setting created the perfect atmosphere, and the resolution was satisfying. 👏"

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Simply Incredible

"Graveyard Shift excels in building up tension and suspense right from the start. The twists are actually incredible, especially the one about the ghosts, which breaks the stereotype in an incredible manner. You can feel the tension throughout the chapters, and the buildup to the climax is amazing. It’s a joy to read and a worthy addition to the Chills and Thrills collection. "

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Graveyard Shift

"Graveyard shift is a fast-paced suspenseful paranormal thriller. I enjoyed the pacing of the story and the lead up to the big reveal. The Author does a good job keeping your attention and dropping little easter eggs. I also love the paranormal and creepiness this story has!👻 I recommend this story to any looking for a short fast paced mystery/thriller! It was a good one 😊"

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Graveyard Shift Review

"I really enjoyed it. It was very refreshing to read a fast paced short story that kept my attention. I really liked the main character, he seemed like a very nice, chill guy and his reaction to seeing ghosts was practically non-existent which I found a little funny. All though there were a few unrealistic moments I think the characters thoughts were conveyed well and the setting was well described. I feel like the author could've added a little world context to the story and given a little more information about the characters life and what kind of person it was, it just seemed like it needed a little more padding. That said I thought it was a really good book, and the plot was intriguing and kept you hooked until the end. There were a few grammatical errors and some shifting tenses but nothing that can't be fixed with a focused proof read, but none of it was very major and you could still understand what the author was saying. I will say that I find keeping the same tense throughout an entire book to be one of the hardest parts of writing. All in all I would say that I enjoyed this book and would definitely read another of the authors books as there relatively easy to read and they're not too long so it's a nice change from my usual reads. The book had a really compelling and suspense filled plot and I really love a supernatural crime thriller so it hit the right audience with me. I'd definitely recommend, especially if you've been stuck reading the same books for months and would like to try something new. The author did a great job overall. x"

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Graveyard Shift

"The author's writing is original and easy to understand. The descriptions are clearly outlined and the emotions of the characters are detailed. The graveyard scene is well-thought-out and adds suspense to the story. I think the story should be prolonged as it will interest readers about the murders happening without anyone knowing. The plot of the story keeps the reader engaged. Good job."

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Chills and Thrills

"THIS WAS AMAZING! I read the first chapter and had no idea what was going to happen. I expected it to be a ghost story like all the others but I was surprised by this and it got more interesting with every single new paragraph. I loved the characters and how they interacted with each other. I have no idea what I would do in their situation. I loved the introduction of some of the characters. And I loved how the author kept us on our toes about what was going to happen and how they did the suspension of the story. The ending was shocking and also very fitting! 10 out of 10 would recommend for someone who loves reading supernatural stories! "

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THRILLING FAST-PACED MYSTERY!

"Whoaaaaa! What a book!! Very, thoroughly enjoyable ✨️ but before I begin, let me say my thank you to Ed for getting me out of my reading slump! After reading too many romance, I kind of need a break. I am soooo glad I decided to read this book cause this is clearly what I need right now! It has everything--shirt chapters, light and easy narrative, amazing hero and heroine, and fast-paced plot. Basically no room for boredom if you read this book. It is a story about a guy named Alex who just got a job in a cemetary. What he did not know was that there were surprises waiting for him--mysterious graveyard with black water pouring out, ghosts flying around, and the worst of all, a serial killer in tow. I love reading how Alex navigates his way to catch the bad guy and solve the mystery about the murder of those people in the graveyard. It was highly entertaining and how his 'friends' help him and they together hand in hand cooperating to solve the murder was totally intriguing. I literally read it in one sitting and I cant get enough! Thanks for the entertainment Ed! It is a great read indeed 🥳✨️"

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Loved it.

"Prepare for an exhilarating journey into the supernatural with 'Chills and Thrills on the Graveyard Shift.' This captivating tale delivers a seamless blend of mystery, crime, and the paranormal, leaving readers spellbound from beginning to end. The narrative unfolds effortlessly, drawing readers into the intriguing world of Alex and his mysterious encounters during his graveyard shift. As the story progresses, the characters come to life with depth and complexity, keeping me thoroughly engaged and eager to uncover the truth behind Alex's chilling experiences. What sets this story apart is its ability to keep the suspense taut throughout, ensuring that each page turn brings new revelations and spine-tingling moments. It's a testament to the author's skill in crafting a narrative that balances intrigue with effortless readability. For fans of mystery and the supernatural, 'Chills and Thrills on the Graveyard Shift' is a must-read. With its captivating plot and fascinating characters, this story delivers the perfect blend of excitement and suspense. Don't miss out on the opportunity to experience the thrills and chills of this gripping tale."

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Mystery and spoooky vibes!

"This story was a very easy and suspenseful read. I found the characters to be very interesting and kept me wanting to know who Alex saw during his shift. Anyone who enjoys a bit of mystery, crime and supernatural occurrences should definitely give this story a read! "

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Liked it

"It was an easy read all 7 chapters. Will read the rest of the stories "

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Grave Yard Shift : Chills and Thrills

"Unputdownable book . I love it!!!! Less is definitely more here!!!"

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Graveyard Shift

"I haven't read a horror work in a while, so I'm not the best person to pass an opinion on it but I did enjoy this read. I would say that a final polish/proofread to tidy up a few bits would be helpful but overall it's a solid piece that serves well as a novella. I read this in one go as I felt like that would provide me with the best reading experience for your writing style. It did add to it as you did a really good job with suspense and ending chapters at the right instance to make readers want to continue! Can definitely see this as a short movie or maybe a game!"

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Really good!

"Honestly at first when I started reading it, I wasn't too sure if it was for me. However, after reading into it a bit it started to intrigue my interest. If I had to rate it so far I'd give it roughly a 8.5-9/10 but obviously that could get better as more chapters are released. Overall I'd recommend this to anyone who's interested in eerie and subtle horror. Good job!"

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