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"This was fantastic. Well done, sir."

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Fantastic

"fantastic writing. Thanks for this."

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"I loved the historical concept behind the Forbidden Forest. Truly a brilliant idea!"

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Amazing.

"This was amazing. It was well written and very interesting. It kept me entertained from start to finish. I love stories about the Founders. This was an excellent to add to the collection of others that I've read. Great job."

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"I love the language in this. It's written like folklore. The characterizations of the Founders was true to their house philosophies. Never thought about the forest being forbidden to protect the creatures. Nice idea."

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Good read.

"This was really quite nice. I got goosebumps at the end of it. Wow. I like how you pulled from the old lore and brought to life some of our classical mythical creatures. Well done."

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