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Living Inside Your Eyes - The story of a young girl, who is nearing her death after afflicted by Leukemia. July - 07 - Wednesday “It is my birthday. Everything happened today is unforgettable in this whole lifetime and in my next too. I got a continuum Fingerboard as a gift. I told Krishna, “I am ugly. I am not beautiful enough to be loved by you.” “Come close, look into my eyes and say how they look,” Krishna told me. “Those are the most beautiful thing I have ever seen in my life,” I told him. He asked me, “Do you know why they look beautiful?”And he said, “It is because you are inside...” Then suddenly I felt that something had stuck my brain and I counted the pages of her diary and reached to 93, the number of rose plants in that garden. In her diary, every page was written except this one. And this page contained a Chinar leaf stuck to it....
She fills my days as my memories.
As after I open my eyes in the morning,
she is the first person I think about.
She occupies my nights as my dreams.
As every night she comes in my dreams…
Though all my days and nights are offered by God to be lived by me,
She is the one living it.
Actually, ‘She’ living within myself is the one who is living my life more than I live...
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Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾
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Charmaine: THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT IM GONNA READ IT LATER BC IM TIRED BC I JUST FINISHED WRITING 10 CHAPTERS IN 1 DAY!
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Farial-Jap-Girl: なんて素敵で、予想もしなかった読書体験なんでしょう! これは間違いなく、ありきたりな恋愛小説ではありません。むしろ、そうじゃないことに感謝したいくらいです。登場人物たちがとてもリアルに感じられるんです。欠点があって、複雑で、情熱的で、人間らしい「白か黒かでは割り切れない」魅力的なグレーの部分に満ちています。怒りや支配、愛、そして怒りの赤い霧に飲み込まれそうになったときに、別の道を選ぶ可能性を描いているところも、とても好きでした。でも正直、一番の驚きは、この本がとにかく楽しく読めたこと! 作者はヒロインの声を見事に描き出していて、私はすっかり別の時代、別の場所へ連れ去られたような気分になりました...
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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...
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mutondimaluleke: Amazing story, loved every bit of it. I definitely recommend
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Biva: Quite good for a novella. Impressive writing style and we'll edited. Just one thing- Karla keeps referring herself to a stray cat and while at first it makes sense the analogy gets stale after a while.
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