Equinox

"I think the story is good, the pacing needs a bit of work. There was a lot of exposition in the beginning, but not a lot of story between the beginning and when they land on the planet. I feel Jason's powers could have been explained a lot more. "

Equinox: Beginnings

"I like the story and the plot. I dislike some of the very minor grammar mistakes, sentences where people are speaking, but the first quotation mark is missing is common. "

Equinox: Beggings

"If you are looking for a different type of Science Fiction story this book is a must read. The first book in a four book series that this author’s prolific challenge in this series starts off as intriguing and aggravating at the same time. The main character is not your typical hero, if hero can be used. I plan to read the other books to satisfy my own hope beyond what I suspect and speculate. Never the less this author’s writing style and storyline added with their storytelling expertise makes this most enjoyable to read. The heart of the story is about how influence can span even space. I highly recommend you read this and draw your own conclusions."

Equinox: Beginnings

"I loved this. Couldn’t stop reading it. Can’t wait to read the next book. "

Equinox: Beginning

"I did not expect that kind of an outcome. Very well written with interesting plotline development. I am looking forward to more books from Jason adventure. "

Honestly Amazing!

"This is one of the best books I've ever read, I finished it in a day! Jason's introduction, character building, and overall flow of the growth was something that captivated me. Along with the fact that he uses his logical thinking to solve his problems instead of just smashing his way through is quite nice. It was a very enjoyable story, with an amazing plot. I hope you keep doing good works like this!"

Equinox

"For some reason this review will not let me pass. This is the second time this has happened to me in this site, there seems to be a problem in the review program."

Really good

"Really good reading because of modern simplicity - contemporary space opera. Proper reading for our fast times."

Equinox

"I enjoyed this book. I liked how it began and ended. The beginning made you wonder about what those on the ship were up to. I didn't like that the friends didn't stick together. But it was great to see that progress was being made even amidst all the caous."

Equinox

"Love the story but it was to short, look forward to the next story great job God Bless"

Bairagi

"Good writing"

Book

"I loved the storyline. Its a classic tale of how ultimate power can ultimately corrupt. "

Shadow

"Can’t wait to continue into the next book, great job!"

Väga ia

"Väga ia raamat on"

Strong idea

"I like the concept and am excited to read more as you write more. My advice would be to move away from the information giving in the prologue and birth sequence and continue with the interesting character you’ve created. Hope that you can return the favor and review my book too!"

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Pretty good

"This is a neat story. I felt that it moved along too fast, however. In the first chapter, it passes literally three weeks in between two paragraphs. Other than that, it's a wonderful book, I hope that the author knows that."

Very Enjoyable!

"I'm enjoying the sci-fi style, almost like a movie in a book. I could see this being a great movie."

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Short

"I liked the story in general. I liked that the main character is obviously not a good guy. It'll be interesting to see how the final story ends. Will it be that the main character gets defeated (Good wins), the character becomes completely corrupted and takes over (Evil wins), or will the storyline being set up between him and the princess remind him of his humanity and bring him back from the dark place he has gone (Redemption). I do not like the pace or length of the story. It's unfinished. I understand that it's a first in a series, but it doesn't feel like the first in a series; it just feels like the start of the story. It didn't follow the structure of Into->Rising Action->Climax->Falling Action->Resolution. The story stopped at Rising Action and I wish the writer would have finished this part of the story before starting on the next installment. Knowing when to start and stop stories is very important, but I have hopes that this author will get there."