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Framed Connections

"This is an awesome story. I love the journey of Roxanne and Marcel. This story is so different from most romantic stories that it stands out. Great job, author 💞🩷💞"

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Good Story

"The plot line is very good. I love the characters description. I believe though, that there is a lot of telling. The descriptions would have done well if written in an active sentence. The narration sounds a bit weird, almost monotonous, but it's good. Just needs more work. Altogether, the story is very good! "

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