College Murder: The Remake by Hi at Inkitt
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College Murder: The Remake

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Summary

πΎπ‘Žπ‘‘π‘–π‘’ 𝑖𝑠 π‘Ž 𝑠𝑑𝑒𝑑𝑒𝑛𝑑 π‘Žπ‘‘ π‘‘β„Žπ‘’ πΆπ‘œπ‘™π‘™π‘’π‘”π‘’ π‘œπ‘“ πΏπ‘Žπ‘˜π‘’π‘€π‘œπ‘œπ‘‘ π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘ 𝑖𝑠 𝑝𝑒𝑙𝑙𝑒𝑑 π‘–π‘›π‘‘π‘œ π‘Ž π‘€π‘œπ‘Ÿπ‘™π‘‘ π‘œπ‘“ π‘‘π‘Ÿπ‘œπ‘’π‘π‘™π‘’ π‘œπ‘›π‘π‘’ β„Žπ‘’π‘Ÿ ex-π‘π‘œπ‘¦π‘“π‘Ÿπ‘–π‘’π‘›π‘‘ 𝑖𝑠 π‘šπ‘¦π‘ π‘‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘–π‘œπ‘’π‘ π‘™π‘¦ π‘˜π‘–π‘™π‘™π‘’π‘‘ 𝑖𝑛 β„Žπ‘–π‘  π‘‘π‘œπ‘Ÿπ‘š, π‘™π‘’π‘Žπ‘£π‘–π‘›π‘” πΎπ‘Žπ‘‘π‘–π‘’ π‘‘π‘œ π‘π‘–π‘π‘˜ 𝑒𝑝 π‘‘β„Žπ‘’ 𝑝𝑖𝑒𝑐𝑒𝑠 π‘œπ‘“ π‘€β„Žπ‘Žπ‘‘ β„Žπ‘Žπ‘π‘π‘’π‘›π‘’π‘‘ π‘‘β„Žπ‘Žπ‘‘ π‘›π‘–π‘”β„Žπ‘‘ π‘Žπ‘  π‘ β„Žπ‘’ π‘π‘Žπ‘›π‘‘π‘  π‘‘π‘œπ‘”π‘’π‘‘β„Žπ‘’π‘Ÿ π‘€π‘–π‘‘β„Ž β„Žπ‘–π‘  π‘“π‘Ÿπ‘–π‘’π‘›π‘‘π‘ . π‘Šβ„Žπ‘œ 𝑖𝑠 π‘‘β„Žπ‘’ πΆπ‘’π‘™π‘π‘Ÿπ‘–π‘‘? I decided to remake it...because I ran out of ideas..so enjoy this story! (OG ON WATTPAD ALONG WITH THE OTHER REMAKE)

Genre
Mystery/Thriller
Author
Hi
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

P R O L O G U E

It was a stormy night over the College of Lakewood as thunder raged on, as the rain fell heavily on the roofs, making all sorts of racket and pitter-patter on the ceiling..


In the dim light of a pole, two students, Kenny and Annie tried to walk back to their dorm, holding hands as their shadows lazily appeared on the path becoming longer. Kenny had an umbrella hung over them as they walked.


Annie said "It sure is stormy out here..we needa get in the dormitory quick."


Kenny nodded his head quickly, as he pressed his lips on Annie's forehead with a tender kiss, "We're gonna be fine..okay?"


Annie soon had something spark in her mind, ot was Kelly, her roomate who had went out a date with someone and had came in earlier than her. She sighed as she pulled out her phone, "Kelly! Answer! Ugh..we should've left class instead of staying for studying. ." She curled her lip in annoyance.


Kenny looked at her and replied, "I'm sorry..I didn't know the weather would be like this."


Annie looked him, a slight smile emerging on her face as she kissed him on his lips and smiled brightly.


Soon, she heard Kelly answer. "Hello who's this?" She called out over the phone.


Annie giggled as she asked"Heh, it's Annie..can you unlock the door?" She looked around cautiously as they continued to walk down the path to the dormitory.


Annie started to feel uneasy, but soon things started to feel like it wasn't real, as in a flash a cloaked and masked figure lunged at Kenny violently. Annie drawed back from the eerie situation as she trembled, she saw the figure, it's body looking masculine and strong.


She wanted to walk back more, but she had frozen, like a statue..the air hung as she saw the figure draw a knife, as she watched the umbrella fall and rattle on the path. She saw the blade being raised, she watched as the attacker plummeted the knife into his chest, he heard Kenny's bloodcurdling screams.


Soon Kenny's silence filled the area, as she saw the figure get closer to her, walking slowly. Annie's eyes widened as she was still frozen up.


Even through the mask, Annie felt the warm breath on her neck and felt a shiver run down her spine. She felt it forcefully grab her arm and pull her closer.


She felt a pain in her stomach.


She wanted to move somewhere, but she couldn't.


She looked down, she saw the knife stuck in her gut, she felt tears stream from her cheeks, thoughts flashed through her mind as she felt numb..


She saw the attacker take it out swiftly, adjusting it to her chest, digging into her chest, she felt her eyes close..


She fell, lifeless..


Meanwhile, Kelly had waited for Kenny and Annie to come back to the dorm with their friends, Victor, Derek, Connor, Leah, and Tatum. They had wanted to throw a small party and wanted to have fun on that rainy night.


Victor was Kenny's roomate and sat on the couch, watching the TV. He asked, "When will they be here?" He had brown hair and green eyes.


Leah had shrugged her shoulders replied, "I don't know..maybe they got caught up in the rain?" She was a petite blonde with a ponytail and brown eyes.


Connor, a good friend of Kelly and her date had been by Kelly, kissing her softly as he comforted her, his soft voice saying "It's gonna be alright, Kelly, their gonna come soon. Okay?" He had dark skin and brown eyes.


Kelly scowled as she fidgeted with a pencil, "They are probably in danger! Connor! Or worse!" Kelly had brown hair and a fair skin tone.


Derek who was Tatums boyfriend had laid by her on the floor, watching the TV, blanket covering them both as she turned to Tatum who had fear in her eyes.


Tatum quickly entered his embrace as Derek soothed her.


Kelly turned to the others and scowled, "You know! You guys aren't really their friends if you don't want to help!" She grabbed her coat and rushed out the door, into the raging storm.


There she found Annie's and Kenny's lifeless bodies, the blood had quickly washed up due to the rain. Annie had lay there, eyes widened and full of fear..she looked at Kenny's body, his face also full of fear.


Kelly screamed and called the cops, until she turned to a tree nearby, it's words seemed to be carved with a rock with jagged letters saying 'π–Ÿπ–”π–š 𝖆𝖑𝖑 π–†π–—π–Š π–Œπ–”π–“π–“π–† π–˜π–šπ–‹π–‹π–Šπ–—..' Kelly cried as she called the cops.


Soon sirens could be heard into the distance as the police arrived on scene..

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