What is your opinion?
Intriguing
"I loved this! But....it was too short! I feel like there could be so much more to explore in this world! Great twist on the concept of time travel! I got just a taste of the characters and would live to learn more about them. I think you built a great beginning here. Would love to read more of their story. I hope you keep writing! Well done! "
Couldn't stop reading
"This story was so interesting to read and I may have made the mistake of reading it in school, I almost got no work done because I just kept reading it. Your writing style was really awesome and as said in another review, everything flowed together. I hope that you write more short stories like this one, it was so interesting!"
Interesting!
"This is a really interesting story. I loved the supernatural element the author used and tied to the real world. Paradox Manor seems like a very interesting place, and I loved how the story was short yet left me thinking. This was interesting and I can't wait to see what else the author has in store in other works. **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR BELOW."
Excellent!!
"This story was an absolute joy to read! Everything flowed together so well that it was like sitting down to watch a short film in my mind. I enjoyed that the supernatural element was one that made me think versus just being creepy. This story has easily and quickly become a favorite of mine."
Is it finished?
"You have it posted as an excerpt, it read like it was finished. Either way a great story. Some might find the dialogue hard to follow due to the accent written in, but I loved it. For some reason I was reminded of Poe, or Lovecraft, not sure why those names poped into my head while i read your story. I look forward to more."
