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"I am in love with the characters. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Loved it!!

"Again, you didn’t disappoint me with your writing. I loved seeing the character development happen throughout the story, and it’s so wholesome when I just look back at the prior moments. "

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Lovely story

"Second book I get to enjoy from this author. Never got bored of it and couldn’t put it down. I wished we had more info about their trip to Terra, if they did go"

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Really good

"This is a story not to be missed. Terrific characters and plot, the story flow is easy to follow. Definitely consider getting this published. "

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A Fairy Tale

"It was like LOTR mixed with Spiderwick Chronicles mixed with King Arthur. I enjoyed reading it and following all of their adventures. It was so romantic and adventurous. Your story was hard to stop reading."

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The Trials of Avaelon

"I love this series of books. Well written with a fantastic plot. "

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Great!

"Amazing job! I was completely enthralled through the entire story! 😊"

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Help awesome story

"I wish I could read chapter 5 and beyond! Pleaae help "

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The Trials of Avaelon

"The storyline is interesting.. I enjoyed it greatly.."

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Trials of Avelon

"Good story much more intriguing then the first in the series.Hope that each of the seven characters find true happiness ever after.With who they should be with"

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