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Shattered - I. Thunderclap

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Summary

The time of humans is over! The orc hybrids have forged a more sustainable world, guided by strict moral codes. But peace is fragile as long as the only fertile land on the continent is ruled by the Ozuruk Warriors. These ruthless, lizard-like creatures seek to bring everything under their dominion, just as they once did with the forest – or are they also driven by the will to survive? War seems inevitable. The commander of Oschya must make a crucial decision: will he abandon his principles to defeat his enemies once and for all? Or will he risk another defeat in a battle fought with primitive weapons and magic? They have the technological advantage, and they have allies – but what if, by using forbidden knowledge, they destroy all that remains of their world? Crematory, the orc boy, is torn between duty and his own desires. Zelas, the forest elf girl, lives for revenge. When their eyes meet for the first time, everything they once believed begins to falter. Will they remain true to their original goals, or surrender to an all-consuming love? Duty and dreams, obsessive desire and reason clash within their minds. Slowly, it becomes clear that the stakes are far greater than they ever dared to think. The enemy does not dwell in Grayscar – it hovers above their heads. It creeps into their dreams and infects their souls. The story unfolds through multiple perspectives in a close third-person narrative. At its heart lies the intense, passionate desire between the two protagonists – along with a raw, at times strikingly explicit tone. (The original story is hungarian, written by me. Unfortunatelly, I'm not so good at english, so for translate I use google translate and ChatGPT.) Please let me know and leave some comment if you'd like more chapters in english language.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Characters: 1. chapter

1. Block

Orcs

Crematory Flamefury – warrior (geek), son of Val’Grav, stepson of Mori

Val’Grav Ag’drok (Blackaxe) – warrior, Crematory’s father, stepfather of the Swift brothers, husband of Mori

Rorscha Swift – the youngest Swift brother, son of Mori, stepson of Val’Grav, Crematory’s stepbrother and friend, archer

Astrol Swift – the middle Swift brother, son of Mori, stepson of Val’Grav, Crematory’s stepbrother, shooter

Zedegar Swift – the oldest Swift brother, son of Mori, stepson of Val’Grav, Crematory’s stepbrother, shooter

Mori Ag’drok – wife of Val’Grav, mother of the Swift brothers, Crematory’s stepmother

Rena Flamefury – warrior, Val’Grav ex wife, Crematory’s mother

Commander Urzor Black – Commander of Oschya

Damien – real orc, the Guardian, shaman, alchemist

Backrig Marzkruster – ex commander

Ozuruks

Orzes – leader of the Ozuruk warriors

Thronk, Garrin, Zaid, Wylonn, Deven – warriors of Orzes

Elves

Zelas Il’launa (from the moon) – diabolik

Alenaär, Waldor, Yldor Il’launa – Zelas’s brothers

Aezel Il’launa – Zelas’s father

Aladrys Ranlauna (Rys) – shadow warrior, Zelas’s friend/lover

Ryara Syarän – leader of the diabolics (Blades of Vengance), Zelas’s mentor


Lyra Ennys – mage, Crematory’s friend


Dryns

Gotty Lyss’leah (Goaty, Little goat) – dryn princess, Eryna’s daughter, Zelas’s friend

Eryna Lyss’leah – dryn queen, Gotty’s mother

Seruun Liff’glist – Gotty’s ex boyfriend


Greybrich (Gaelath) – leader of the druids

Other

Sandro – ex priest

Naär – God of the Forest

Otthar – God of the Sun

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