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"I need more of story. Thank you "
Free To Love
"Quite a few mistakes need to be fixed. The quotation marks are in the wrong spots in so many areas. The story has potential but it needs to be reviewed and edited."
Story gaps
"The beginning of the story have a good plot. But the story feels like it’s missing chapters in between with a lot of plots. It talks about different characters that are suddenly introduced and have speaking roles. But are not formally introduced that’s what I said. It feels like chapters are missing."
