Inkitt
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So far so good

"I very much enjoyed it! Well written and definitely a page turner. Would read this author again anytime. "

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His First His Second An Alicia Friend investigation

"Great mystery great story line. "

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His first, His second

"Absolutely loved the intricate plot, the suspense, the action, the dialogues, everything."

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Adri

"Like the book it is a interesting book. Lots of plots but a good read like the end."

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"I really enjoyed this, full of surprises and twists. I suggest you publish this in NovelStar. A lot of readers will love your work."

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His First, His Second

"Pretty good story...Was very intrigued with all the characters, all the twists, but a possible good ending with the pregnancy tester. makapueo65 "

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His First His Second

"I truly enjoyed this book. Alicia was really good. The plots, twists and turns kept me intrigued. The best part was that the butler did it! Who'd of thunk it! 😁"

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His First His Second: An Alicia Friend Investigation

"Really suspenseful, gripping and who would have thought it was the frigging butler? I really enjoyed your novel, keep up the good work!"

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Like it

"Thankyou. Good read."

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Awesome

"Awesome read! Enjoying this book, all the plots and turns. Clever and well written! "

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Alicia friend

"I was a little confused at first meeting all the characters there were a lot of them I enjoyed your story author you did a real jam up job I'm looking forward to reading more thank you for your time and effort"

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His first his second

"Loved this book. Kept me hooked right up to the end. Thank you "

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His first, his second

"Loved every minute. Kept slot going on without it becoming confusing or redundant good job"

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His First His Second

"Very interesting book with several twist that kept your attention. I would definitely recommend it."

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Marvellous

"A proper story that keeps you reading nd reading"

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His first, his second

"Way too long but worth the read"

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His First His Second

"Very complicated plot. I really enjoyed this book. I hope you extend this into a series."

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His first, his second

"Gripping story line. Loved all the different twists. Can't wait for the next one!!!"

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Good plot, great characters

"Wonderful story, many twists and I loved the end just hope she stays with the police department. I would love to read more of her adventures "

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His First His Second

"I like the storyline. Few grammatical errors but the plot is interesting. Some scenes happen so quickly and it makes it all the more interesting. "

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