What is your opinion?
The Cork Beat
"Great mystery story. I'm usually pretty quick at figuring out who the guilty party is, but not this time! Lol. I must confess, however, the mechanics of the story (spelling, grammar, etc) left me confused several times and I would have to reread until I got the gist of what you were trying to impart. It detracts from an otherwise good story. You did a really good job of making Vince and Julie work as a team. You made each suspect look viable until they weren't. It's a good story. It would be even better if you could clean up the mechanics."
Good.
"Cheers for sharing."
The Cork Beat
"I really enjoyed this story! Great plot and cast of characters! It is also very interesting that it is set in Cork, Ireland. Keep up the good work! "
The Cork Beat
"Another great story from this author. Full of action and plenty of twists and turns to keep you guessing till the finish. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing to make it hard to follow. Well put together, and a plot to keep you interested, this is worthy of the time spent reading."
the cork beat
"It was a good story I really did enjoy it it was a hard read though with the grammar in the way he wrote and I think that you need to do a little studying in English it could have been his way to do it I don't know what it was a hard read but I did enjoy it thank you Arthur"
Good reading
"Good plot...story...continuity.. However I don't get the atrocious spelling and grammar. Is this the new way??? Certainly hope not..!!"
Good job
"It's a good story. It could use some more editing, but overall a good thriller....."
A partially good read
"The writer has a good imagination, however the spelling, grammar, and punctuation was terrible. There is something that can definitely be made of this book. In my opinion it just needs some work. "
