What is your opinion?
Things aren’t always what they seem...
"This is an excellent book that focuses on a character who has experienced great tragedy and who is told that what he sees isn’t always real. There are a lot of very good characters in this book, and the plot is very well-crafted and always keeps the reader wondering what will happen next. There are also themes like justice and healing in the book, and the ending relates to those themes but maybe not in the way that a reader might expect it to; and I liked the way that the ending gets the reader thinking. I highly recommend this book, and I look forward to reading more writing by this author."
The Unseen one: 💜
"I have just finished the 25 chapters of this bad boy. The unseen one well what a name I love it and really dose match what the story is about which guess what fellow readers I will not kiss and tell. I found in summary this action and psychological thriller book really keeps you on your toes as you read on. I love how Abeer styled her Writting for this one so original and the chapters in my eyes were perfect, you have to really pay attention and read. The author created the tension and atmosphere really well, such uncertainty at times, pushing readers to continue to read on rather than giving to much away for someone like me I love. I felt a lot for Zaroon character so many different emotions I felt with this one pulling at my heart big time. I will be checking out more of Abeer upcoming work, thank you for creating such a powerful book my lovely 💜 "
Between Doubt and Mystery: A Fascinating Journey
"I really like the way the main character is constructed. The fact that he’s not the typical charming protagonist adds depth to his persona. The handling of time throughout the story, as well as the way it makes the reader question what’s real and what’s uncertain, is both brilliant and unsettling. It creates a mysterious atmosphere that draws the reader in, inviting them to become part of the unraveling of the mystery. I was especially captivated by the inclusion of words and expressions from the author’s culture, along with their explanations—it's always a pleasure to learn something new.""
Extremely interesting 👌🏻
"This is a great way to talk about grieving a loss of someone you grew to live and now they're gone you feel the real loss, but it's like your mind won't let you really feel it. Love the feel of it when you read, it's like your part of the story!"
The Unseen One
"This is a great book. It's filled with suspense and growing relationships between different characters. All the details really enhance the story making it a great read. I love the use of the Pakistani (I don't know what it's called, apologies) language. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing serious. I haven't finished yet but I promise I will. Happy writing!"
My review...
"The author Abeer did a great job in creating a story that is both scary and exciting.The characters ae very well written. I am reading this story and it is simply amazing .It is full of suspense and kept me guessing until the end. Overall , I highly recommend the story to anyone who loves thriller and suspense.It's an exciting read that won't put you down.."
Finished!
"This was a damned enjoyable read! I don't get to see too many books that have characters going through mental issues (presumed or otherwise) that I feel like I'm rooting for. Loved the story, and it's got plenty of suspense to go around, which keeps you coming back for more. The ending made me laugh with wicked anticipation, just imagining all the terrible things that might start to snowball for our boy Zaroon! You did a great job Abeer! Now, if I had any comments: The first would be light editing mistakes near the last third of the story. (damned things never seem to go away, no matter how hard you try and purge them, am I right?) The second, I'd love to see more detail to flesh out all the different parts of the story. It felt almost too fast at times, and while all the characters were great and the dialogue was solid, I wish I could get to know them more! "
The Unseen One – A Review
"As a fan of the horror genre, I find this story to be such a ride. It is thrilling and gripping. The mystery leaves the reader uncertain and yet at the edge of their seat, wanting to read the next chapter and the next to see how the mystery will unfold. It is truly an engaging story with a simple yet good writing style. It's definitely worth a read!"
the unseen one
"beautiful story, played on the heart from start to end. great MC and support, a lot of twists that keep you on your toes throughout. thank you for the explanations of words and phrases. I am tickled to actually know some of the dishes, lol thank you so much for sharing."
Review - The Unsen One
"I’m not usually a fan of horror stories, but this one truly held my attention. The plot is gripping, and the storytelling is highly engaging. One aspect I personally found a little bit challenging was sometimes the frequent shifts in the timeline—it was hard for me to keep track at times. However, those shifts also added a unique depth and dimension to the story, making it stand out."
Not the best but a great plot
"The plot itself is great, I really did enjoy it but I think maybe some more description to make it more interesting wouldn’t be bad. I think you go straight to the next action without a slight pause so we can absorb what has just happened but it’s still a great book. I hope I can read more of this soon enough. XX Karmen Kay"
The Unseen One
""The Unseen One" by Abeer is a story that appears to be a mysterious and intriguing tale with elements of horror and action. The main character, Zaroon, experiences strange and inexplicable events in his life, which could be the result of paranormal phenomena, schizophrenia, or deliberate actions by others. The story begins with Zaroon's unusual birthday, where his friends appear in the middle of the night but deny visiting him the next day. Additionally, the disappearance of the birthday cake and his watch introduces an atmosphere of unease and mystery. As the plot progresses, Zaroon begins to question his own perception of reality, wondering if he is possessed or if his mental state is normal. The writing style is simple and direct, allowing the reader to focus on the unfolding intrigue. The author effectively builds tension by introducing successive unexplained events and leaving the reader with unanswered questions. Elements of Pakistani culture, such as city names (Lahore, Islamabad) and the university (UET), add authenticity and depth to the story's backdrop. The character of Zaroon is presented as an ambitious architectural engineering student who struggles not only with mysterious events but also with social and family relationships. His isolation and lack of trust in his surroundings intensify feelings of loneliness and paranoia. In summary, "The Unseen One" seems to be an intriguing story that combines elements of horror, action, and psychological thriller. The author effectively creates an atmosphere of tension and uncertainty, encouraging the reader to continue uncovering the truth alongside the main character. I is intrestiing to forseen the resolution of the mystery and find out what is really happening to Zaroon."
Is there a part 2?
"Thank you for writing this intriguing story of suspense. I hope, since you left it on a cliff hanger you will make a part two."
Interesting read
"I liked the storyline of this book. It's nice to read a story that isn’t focused on Western ideas for a change. The different cultural elements make it interesting, and I'm excited to see where the story goes. I don't know much about schizophrenia, but the way it's included in the story has caught my attention. I'm looking forward to reading more and discovering how everything unfolds."
The unseen one
"The start was bomb for sure the suspense, the unsurity whether it's a ghost, or his friends harassing him or is he actually schizophrenic or the best possibility I thought of his 1st wife noor taking revenge coz maybe she actually didn't die in that accident lol. The mystery keeps you on toes for whats coming next and the ending was a little plain to me but overall what a Rollercoaster! keep up the work author keep writing 🫶"
ADDICTIVE, A REAL PAGE TURNER!
"I have to hold off my urge to just see the latest chapter to see who is the culprit is it ghost or a person 🤣 Tbh I love spoiler, it does not bother my reading experience, in fact I can be more prepared lol. But nooooooo I hold myself. But that's a proof to how much this book really grips my interest! I love the author easy writing style. The scene also portrayed so good. I also love that the author insert Pakistani's words, culture, and even food in the story, so those who dont live in Pakistan can know more about this beautiful country 😍🥰 (and btw I LOVE Biryani lol) This story is quiet fast paced with twist and turns in every page. The best chapter for me was the first chapter though, the suspense was real there! I think author still have many surprises up her sleeve and I will go back reading it God Willing when I have more time. But after 4 chapters I know this story will be amazing ♡♡ Good Job Fatima!^^"
The Unseen One
"Wow, so the first chapter was wonderful! It kind of gave that thriller vibe because it's so odd. Also, his friends randomly showing up at his house in the middle of the night to give him cake is weird. Like, I get it's his birthday, but then leaving after he cut it is weird! Can't wait to read the rest! :3"
love the story
"really good story, there is nothing bad about it. keep up the good work. i believe in your potential!♡"
I'm intrigued!
"This is an interesting story so far, with an intriguing plot and a compelling set of characters. Keep up the great work, author :)"
Love the story telling
"Recently started reading this novel as a leisure read and I must say I AM IMPRESSED by the authors writing style and story telling Overall plot is very interesting and the author has created compelling characters with beautiful attention to detail. Can’t wait to read more!"
