You Broke Me First by Nwaubani at Inkitt
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You Broke Me First

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Summary

In this opening chapter, we dive into the beginning of a love story that seemed perfect from the outside but held cracks beneath the surface. The chapter explores how love can start with warmth, excitement, and hope, only for those feelings to slowly unravel as unseen issues creep in. For the protagonist, the love she thought was mutual and lasting begins to shift. Her partner, who once felt like a source of joy and security, begins to show signs of judgment and misunderstanding, leading her to question her own worth in the relationship. The chapter sets up the narrative arc by introducing the theme of vulnerability: being open in love, only to feel dismissed or belittled. This first glimpse into her story shows how her partner’s actions slowly chip away at her confidence and joy, planting the seeds of the emotional journey she’s about to navigate.

Genre
Romance
Author
Nwaubani
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Vee met Mitchelle a few months after moving back to her hometown. She hadn’t expected much, but with Mitchelle, everything felt different. Their connection was immediate, like a thread tying them together from the first glance. But the spark was not hers alone. Mitchelle felt it too.

“The worst feeling in the world is knowing you’ve been used and lied to.” — Unknown


Sparks

It was an ordinary evening in late autumn, the kind of night Vee thought would pass unnoticed. But there, across the room, Mitchelle saw her, and something about Vee’s presence pulled her in. Mitchelle had a way with people; she was confident and knew how to hold attention. Yet with Vee, it was different. It wasn’t about charming her or impressing her; it was about knowing her. She crossed the room with an almost uncharacteristic nervousness, but when Vee looked up and smiled, all of that melted away.

“Hey, I’m Mitchelle.” The words felt so simple, yet they were the beginning of everything. Vee responded with a shy smile, and before they knew it, they’d been talking for hours. Mitchelle felt safe, like she could open up in a way she hadn’t in a long time. For once, she wasn’t playing a role or trying to be someone; she was simply being herself. And Vee met her there, with a depth and warmth that felt real, something she hadn’t encountered in years.


Laughter and Late Nights

As their friendship turned into something more, the world seemed to brighten. Mitchelle loved how easy it was to laugh with Vee, how they could spend hours at their favorite coffee shop, sharing secrets that felt like pieces of their souls. She could see the sparkle in Vee’s eyes when they made plans for weekend adventures, and that sparkle was something she’d do anything to keep.

Vee loved being around Mitchelle too, watching her talk about her favorite books and the places she dreamed of visiting. Mitchelle’s passion for life was contagious, and Vee found herself trying things she never would have on her own—like late-night karaoke sessions and day trips with no particular destination. Vee felt alive, like she was experiencing the world in vivid color for the first time. The excitement between them was mutual, filling every moment with a sense of promise.

On their long walks through town, Vee would listen as Mitchelle shared stories from her childhood, and Vee would offer her own in return. With Mitchelle, Vee felt a warmth that erased all her doubts and fears, and for the first time, she let herself believe that this love was real, that it would last.


The Dreams They Shared

As they grew closer, their conversations turned to dreams. Vee told Mitchelle about her hopes for the future, for a life that was full of purpose, and Mitchelle listened intently, her eyes shining with understanding. Mitchelle shared her own dreams too, speaking of quiet mornings by the sea, a life where they would build something beautiful together, one little piece at a time.

Mitchelle’s excitement would light up the room as she talked about the places she wanted them to see, the kind of home they’d build together someday. She imagined Sunday mornings filled with the smell of coffee and the sound of old records playing in the background. She’d talk about the stray dog they’d rescue, how they’d name him something funny and spoil him endlessly. Vee would laugh along, feeling herself fall deeper with each story, her heart finding comfort in the picture Mitchelle painted for them.

For Vee, it felt like she was building a life she’d always dreamed of, one where her heart felt safe and valued. With Mitchelle by her side, everything felt possible. She thought she’d finally found someone who understood her, who would protect her heart just as she was willing to protect Mitchelle’s. And Mitchelle, too, believed in this future, feeling a love she never thought she’d have. They were creating their own world, a little bubble filled with love, laughter, and all the hope two people could have.


A World for Two

The chapter closes with both Vee and Mitchelle feeling that they’ve found something rare. They both see a future, a life where they can build each other up, dream together, and face the world side by side. In each other, they find a love that feels like home—a place of warmth, comfort, and trust. Neither of them realizes that beneath these perfect moments, cracks are waiting to appear, and that this connection they hold so tightly will one day be the very thing that breaks them.


In the next chapter, you will learn…

The subtle shifts in Vee and Mitchelle’s relationship that hint at cracks beneath the surface. While they’ve built a connection full of shared dreams and warmth, small but significant moments will start to reveal the differences between them. Vee’s willingness to communicate and be vulnerable is met with resistance, as Mitchelle’s quiet judgments begin to surface.

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