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Nice poem
"This is a nice poem with an uplifting feel to it I think. It ends on a good positive note, leaving you with a smile. I admit I do not usually see much poetry on this site, but it makes a refreshing change to see something a bit different. I don't know much about the technical side of poetry, so all I can really say on that front is that it read well for me. Great work :-) "
Sweet
"This was my first poetry read and I enjoyed it! I don't know enough about poetry to offer any critiques, but all in all it was good in my opinion. Though on the second to last line you wrote "your" instead of "you" I'm pretty sure. Loved the message"
