Good story
"Enjoyed this story.well written. Looking forward to more if writings"
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"Enjoyed this story.well written. Looking forward to more if writings"
"Nice short story , very good"
"I strongly enjoyed this story. It was well written. I couldn't stop reading it until the very end. All I have are praises. I would love a continuation of the story line. Beautiful heart wrenching story."
"Was really enjoying the story but it seems to have been cut short and left unfinished. Only found a few spelling errors but otherwise well written."
"I think the book is exquisite but could be longer, I would also recommend this to all of my friends and acquaintances, and I am giving you top ratings in each rating box."
"I like the indian plot but the writing style could improve but this books has great potential. More detail would be nice such as what the main character actaually looks like "