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Emily lived in a house near a forest. But something was wrong. There was always a rustling noise. Now, she finally found out what it was
One uppn a time, a little girl called Emily lived next to a forest. She was 11 and went to a school in Durham 1 hour away! She had a little brother called Tim who was 3 and always annoyed her. She lived next to the 2nd most dangerous forest in the North East of England. Every day she heard this strange nois
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This is good so far, but needs to be longer. Noise is spelled "N-O-I-S-E" not Nois. This chapter feels unfinished, and needs more description of characters. What does Emily look like? Is she short with bouncy blonde hair? I see you are new here and I don't mean to be so harsh, but keep in mind if you are publishing the story, be sure to call the book "Monster in the forest: Book 1" Not "Chapter 1"
ok thx for info