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Nice Poetry

"I personally like the second chapter, but not the first one. When I read the first chapter, I felt like reading an article or a thesis instead of a short story. I think it would be better if you wrote the whole information in the first chapter from the character's point of view, but I realized that you already classify this as 'Poetry', so characterizations might be not really important. Well, that's what I think. You can do whatever you think is best with your stories :) I know it isn't much, but I'm sure I'll try reading your other stories. Regards, Kei Angelus"

Suicidal Love = Review

"Hi Felipe Let me say straight away that I am not at all into poetry, but I did find the central theme of your work so sad. That much comes over and I wonder whether it is a reflection of some personal tragedy I can't begin to say that I understood your introduction at all, or felt that it had any relevance to the poem itself and the poem itself I felt could have done with a good editing to tidy up some of the images. I see your name and I do wonder if English is your 1st language. If not then this is a very creditable attempt at a prose poem. I did attempt to rewrite the poem as I think you were meaning to put it over and I will send this over as a comment to avoid putting it on a public platform. But I have to say it makes a change to see something different on Inkitt to the usual Tales of Fantasy that seem to predominate. Good luck with your writing. In the meantime, I have the following novels up for the novel writing contest at the moment. If you are so inclined I would invite you to download them and skip through a chapter or two. I wouldn't mind a review as well if possible. I will send the link through with the comment, Sincerely Malcolm Twigg"