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Chronicals of Space echoes

"I loved the drama and the poetic intensity of the writing style but the streamlined plot was missed because of interference by people and characters not supported by the story the story was shorter than expected should have been longer to hold all the characters in. But it was the writing which held the whole thing together made me want to read and there was this almost poetry and doom in it and the drama was effective."

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A bit Rambling for my taste

"A lot of stuff happened in this story, but it was a bit rambling and emotional for me. I found the 'action' parts kinda just elongated the story, again emotionally, and didn't really need to be there. I get that the guy formed an attachment to the kids from a distance, but some interaction with them might have made the story feel more solid... It also seems odd that you have so many votes, and not one review, (except mine)."

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