What is your opinion?
Wow
"What a great story. Such original content, and well written. I loved the ease of the read. I was surprised at the short Chapters, but I'm not into long drawn out stories anyway. You have a great imagination and I'm sure you will go far. Keep writing."
My Best Friend, More like my best story!
"I loved the concept of the story. I felt that it wasn't long enough because I wanted to know more about everyone and everything. With the amazing attention to the few details, I felt that this story was written in a way that got me to love these characters quickly. Fantastic story and I look forward to reading more by this author!"
"My Real Imaginary Love"
"I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading it and was annoyed when my phone ranged while reading it. I answered the phone only because the ringing got on my nerves. I hurried up with the conversation to get back to the story. The story brought back memories of when I had an imaginary friend who also loved and comforted me when I was young. The author has very good writing skills. I identified so much with Jessica. I was happy when she was happy and was sad when she was sad. The ending was perfect. I hope to read more stories by this author."
I'm not crying, just got something in my eye
"Okay, I am crying. It was such a beautiful story, told from such a pure heart and whimsical pen.The story seemed in the beginning to be about a girl struggling with depression. It was glaringly obvious that Tony was not real, and the father's outburst reminded me of how often fathers are more of a problem when dealing with mental illness in their children. The realization that Tony's world was real in its own way as a very sweet one. It alluded to how things which are not real, like a fictional realm, are more important, more heart-warming than things which solidly occupy matter and space. Chelsea's betrayal was a little nonsensical and abrupt, as if she were just realizing everything along with the unwitting Jessica. Jessica's moral dilemma in the following chapters was beautifully relayed to us, even though the gazillion rules about travelling from one world to the other were not amply clear. It was a truly remarkable concept to have Jessica exchange lives with her grandfather. The last chapter had me crying like a baby. First, the parents finally realize Jessica's truth. Jessica's devotion to her parents was the main thing which prevented her from staying with Tony in the other world. Then, Chelsea being accepted into Jessica's family was beautiful because it showed the value of forgiveness. What was Chelsea but a 14 year old girl when she took away Jessica's right to live? Chelsea transitioning into a total gossip girl later on made me smile, it was like a breeze of normalcy and happiness in the face of everything Jessica had been through. The icing on the cake was the perfectly timed return of Tony, who was perfect in every way, except for his name. The way that Tony and Jessica's union facilitated that of the grandparents was very well conceived. The ending was beautiful, with both Tony and Jessica having forgiven Chelsea, and Jessica finally finding the happiness she lost when she was 8 and her dog died. Jessica represented to me myself, and I was so touched by her strength and grace. It was a wonderful story and I would love to read more of you work. Thank you for existing in this cruel world, you give me hope in our future."
Very Intriging Universe
"This story was interesting and intriguing. It had ideas that I hadn't heard of before and was presented in an appealing manner. If it was extended into a novel, I could see this being a great YA book! Voted!"
