Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

The glass room

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

In a not-so-distant future where invisible glass rooms confine every individual, Elias lives a life of structured freedom — productive, efficient, and suffocating. Surrounded by glowing screens and polite reminders of his "liberty," he begins to question the system that promises choice while quietly controlling every aspect of his existence. When the screens go dark one night, Elias discovers something far more dangerous than oppression: silence — and the hint of a crack in the illusion.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The glass room

No one remembered when the glass rooms first appeared.

They weren’t built. They simply were — one day, on every street corner, in every office, inside every home. Transparent. Seamless. Unlocked. Or so they seemed.


Elias lived in one.


It was a nice glass room, all things considered. Climate controlled. With screens on every wall that offered productivity tips, inspirational quotes, and reminders to “Breathe. Smile. You Are Free.” He had a desk, a treadmill, and a mirror that complimented him every morning.


The door had no handle, but no one really talked about that.


Elias worked eight to twelve hours a day. Sometimes more, if he was lucky enough to get noticed. He posted motivational content, tracked his sleep cycle, counted steps, and occasionally cried during meetings — though never loud enough for the algorithm to flag him.


From time to time, he’d press his palm to the glass and watch people outside.


They looked just like him. Each in their own invisible room, walking with purpose, eyes fixed on glowing rectangles. Some smiled. Most didn’t. But all of them were "free."


His neighbor, Mara, once tried to break hers. She screamed, kicked, even stopped checking her emails. For two whole days, the glass glowed red. Then one morning, her room flickered off. Mara smiled again. She got promoted.


Elias wondered, sometimes, if there was a world beyond the glass. He wondered what it felt like to walk barefoot on grass, to speak without censor, to choose.


One night, the screens went dark. No beeps. No slogans. Just silence.


And for the first time in years, Elias heard his own breath. Loud. Unfiltered.


He stood up. Pressed both hands against the glass.

It was cold. Thin. Almost trembling.


He whispered, “Am I free?”

The walls answered nothing.


And yet, in that silence, he saw the crack.

Let tosarkastikomouegw know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

The Mendaxian Pact

lena: The story is well written and keeps you hooked.The blood drinking theme is a bit cringey but the characters are adorable.

Read Now
A Different Species

Shamsayshamsay: I like the world building. The story is interesting. The suspense keeps building. The story has me hooked

Read Now
The First She (Ezron #1) - 2026 Rewrite

CINNAZEN: I loved this book. I’m starting on book two and I’m confused because they talk about her being pregnant in the third chapter after they set off on their way to the new location BUT in this book she’s bleeding and not sure if she’s even pregnant? So that’s one of the things that’s confusing. It doesn...

Read Now
Broken Threads: Curse of Mates

Sarah: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?

Read Now
PLEASE COME COLLECT YOUR DAUGHTER

Sarah: Hello! I really enjoyed reading your story. It made me curious—after finishing this one, did it give you ideas for completely new projects, or do you usually like to take a break before starting another story?

Read Now
THE HIDDEN HEIRESS: RISE OF LYSANDRA MONTCLAIR

Sarah: I really enjoyed reading your story. It made me curious—after finishing this one, did it give you ideas for completely new projects, or do you usually like to take a break before starting another story?

Read Now
THE YIELD

Farial-Jap-Girl: すごく楽しくて、新鮮な物語でした!💕 Vespは頭が良くて、sassもあって、とても魅力的な主人公です!強い女性キャラクターたちも大好きでした。✨ 世界観にもすぐ引き込まれて、romanc、drama、そして少しだけspicyな要素もあって最高!人間とalienの関係を描いた物語としても、とてもuniqueです!Solonのstoryも気になるーーー!🫣💕✨

Read Now
The zatorian

ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

Read Now
Last to Fall

whaleglucose721: Great story line, I really like the pacing of this book (remastered version). Some spelling / grammatical errors but it does not take away from the fantastic story line. The world building is super immersive and fascinating, even though some minor incongruity comes up here and there - I believe as a...

Read Now