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POP GOES THE NERVE

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Summary

"Pop Goes the Nerve"— A raw and honest reflection on the pain of toxic relationships and the lessons learned from betrayal. This poem is a heartfelt expression of disappointment, growth, and the importance of genuine connections. With sharp wit and emotional depth, it exposes the facade of fake friendships and the hurt they bring. A powerful and relatable read for anyone who's navigated the complexities of human relationships.

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Complete
Chapters
1
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Age Rating
13+

POP GOES THE NERVE


Barely a handshake,

Hardly a name.

Yet you played slick,

Like we ran the same game.

What gave you the right?

What a lie you did serve!

You barely knew me—

But pop goes the nerve.

Selfishness laid the ground,

Audacity slayed the game.

You ignored me like

I wasn’t around— insane.

You aren’t even worthy of a mention,

But look—

I wrote a satire for you,

So the scores should even the odds.

Nonetheless— I’m honest, but you?

No roots, no bonds,

Still you swerved.

So quick to cut—

Pop goes the weasel.

Polluted the emotion,

Corrupted the honesty,

Poisoned the relation,

Served the foolery.

Too much gallantly.

I’m disappointed in me—

That I thought you were a friend.

How could I be so blind?

You dumped me like I’m dead.

I’m still amazed

How you face me each day.

We sit in the same class—

Doesn’t it scare you? Anyway—

Thanks for the lesson.

I’ll give you a tip:

The lesson I’ve learned—

By seeing you,

Snakes should wear a drape!



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