What is your opinion?
Highly recommended
"Well, first...I am so shocked when i saw your story has a small review because on my perspective, you I mean your story deserves lot more than that. Writing style: You are not just creating scenes in your story, wanna know what you're creating? you are creating a world. I love everything, very crisp and vivid. Everything falls in place. Charisma on readers: I'm not really into scifi books or stories but you got me going. The curiosity can't stop flowing in my mind on what will happen next. Plot: RICH AND THRILLING A world that never exist will exist as I'm reading further. "
Nobody's boy
"The author's writing style came out to me as very crisp. It made me keep on reading effortlessly. It has an interesting plot. It makes me wonder what will happen next, whether the pig will eventually be destroyed and most of all whether the kids will regain their normalcy at all now that the doctor has died. Very interesting piece of work and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work."
Nobody's Boy
"This story is fun, lots of action, very creative. I would like to see a little more description early on; because of the spelling, I thought Rikki was a girl at first. There are some errors in punctuation and grammar, and typos that can easily be fixed. I like that some of the backstory for the main characters' is starting to be revealed, hopefully there will be more of that as the story progresses, and perhaps some info on the society that produced the situation on the island. The section where the characters didn't know that meat has to be cooked was a little strange, most people are aware of that. I'm also not sure what the title refers to, perhaps that will be revealed as the story progresses. Overall it just needs a little clean up to be very good indeed."
Review
"This story is interesting and a page turner that I just want to keep reading and can't wait for it to be finished. I can't wait to see what happens next and where the story leads. Definitely keep writing."
Interesting Start
"Interesting start to the story. It's a little light on the necessary details that really make a story shine, but I enjoyed the premise of the plot. I feel like there is a lot more left to be told, not just in the story itself, but also about the characters and their backstory that brought them to where they are now. It makes me want to keep reading in hopes of finding the answers. Well done! Great start to a very interesting young adult novel."
