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Awakening

"Great read. Too bad the story isn't finished, I would have enjoyed more of it."

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Supernaturals

"It's a really interesting and an adventurous story about 6 people who find themselves with some supernatural powers. "

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Awakening

"Good so far i like rhe plot "

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Please continue!

"I really like it! The plot is jnteresting and the character development was good too! Please continue the story"

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Recommended

"Please finish. It is a great story that has heart in it! Great job! :)"

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Love it

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Great!

"I would not say that this story is for children, as it says. In my opinion, it is much deeper and complicated. The story is certainly amusing and thrilling. It is full of suspense and it kept me interested Chapter through Chapter. When I started reading it, I had the impression that it is going to be of a completely different type. But, it soon proved me wrong. I am really glad to have read this and I would recommend it. Sophie is really one of a kind. I also have to speak well of your style of writing. I really enjoyed it. It is gripping, amusing, but with a serious tone to it. You are one of those writers who make every word believable. This is a story with a nice flow and it is well worth reading!"

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Well done

"I admire your creativity. You have written a great piece. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at cbdoungd876 AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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Very good

"Wonderful book. Hoping for a continuation of this beautiful story. For the book lovers, it's a book worth your time. Job well done."

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Awakening

"While the story is compelling, it stops just short of a satisfactory ending. Rescuing Lilli from the demons would easily solve this problem. If you write a sequel, please have Sophie develope greater control over the pulsating light. Also greater control of the demons would be helpful. Maybe the demons could destroy Akeldama. Maybe the light. Definitely an author worth watching 🌹"

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Entertaining, dark

"One disturbing mistake: at the police station it was mentioned that Lilli is part of the escaping group. I find the story too dark, though its exciting and well paced. There is too much fear in the group. One can't battle or overcome demons if one is fearsome. They'll break you, before the battle begins. But otherwise the author shows much talent in writing a gripping novel. "

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Hey

"Interesting "

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It started out as good... to bad it is not complete.

"the leads seems powerful but they always lose. what's up with that? anyway for me it started as good, when I was in the half of it, it got demoted to ok and then meh... at the end its just disappointing as it ends in cliffhanger and no Book 2 in the works Would I re-read? -NO Would I read other works of this author? -Maybe if this story has part 2, coz its incomplete.. Even though I am not excited to read the rest coz it boring. Will I keep this in my reading List? -For now I will keep this in my List that I regret reading, since it is incomplete and no book 2 in the works Will I recommend? -For now, NO.. coz once again it's in cliffhanger"

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