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Spotlight - MLP Make Your Mark Carnival AU

Summary

You wake up in a rotting, candy-coated Carnival. The lights flicker. The ground sticks to your hooves. You don’t remember how you got here—only that something is deeply, horribly wrong. Welcome to the Unity Carnival: a twisted reflection of Equestria’s harmony, ruled by the ever-smiling Ringmaster Sunny Starscout. Her mission? Preserve Unity at all costs… and you’d better not break the rules. Each of her friends has been given a room—and a role: Izzy paints in blood, smiling through her madness, a chain-dragging ghost with cartoon weapons and a cheerful laugh you should never follow. Hitch guards his room—and Sparky—with blind, feral loyalty. Pipp dances in silence behind a wall of music and mirrors, her grace hiding something broken and watching. Zipp lures you into puzzles and traps, fast as lightning and twice as cruel if you try to cheat. Comet, a stitched-mouthed unicorn, follows Izzy like a shadow. He never speaks. But he always listens. Misty is the only one who might help you—if she isn’t too scared to run. And beyond the rooms… Something huge stalks the dark hallways. Something with teeth. Your goal? Escape. Sunny’s goal? Keep the Carnival running. And in the Unity Carnival, one thing is very clear: Breaking the rules has consequences.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Welcome - Page 1

Chapter 1 - Welcome

The Player (you)

You blink in confusion as you look around. Where am I? It seems like you’re in a carnival of some kind, but have no memory of coming here, or how you got here in the first place. The wood under your hooves creak slightly, and there’s multicolored blue and red lights that flicker and glow above you. The ground is sickly sweet and sticky in random places, and you see what looks like cotton candy in the corner of the room. The walls are striped red and gold-yellow, and look like their covered in dust. You squint at a sign above you, covered in dirt and half-falling apart, but you can make out the words written in faded gold letters: Unity Carnival. So this is a carnival. You look around, and you catch a flicker of movement on a ledge above you. You squint, catching sight of gold feathers that glow a bit, but they vanish around a corner as quickly as they appeared.

“Um, hello?” You call, trying to spot the gold feathers again. “Is someone there?”

Something shifts on the ledge, but no one answers you. You frown, then start walking towards it. You stop, thinking for a moment. Is it really a good idea to follow some random pony in this strange place? A low tapping sounds upstairs on the ledge, like a set of hooves walking across the wood of the floor. You prick your ears, straining to locate the source of the tapping, and are confused when you realize it’s coming from behind you, opposite the ledge where you saw the glowing golden feathers. Whoever is behind you is not whoever was up on that ledge.

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