Being His Slave (Original Version) by V. A. Gris at Inkitt
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Being His Slave (Original Version)

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Summary

The unpolished story that started it all. This is the original version of Cole and Macy’s dark, tangled love story. A messy first draft that somehow became unforgettable. Plot holes, rough edges, and all… it’s yours again to enjoy. And if you’re just discovering it, I hope you enjoy the diamond in the rough that this story truly was.

Status
Complete
Chapters
34
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Foreword

This is the original versin of Being His Slave. Although I had the documents, a few of them got corrupted over the years due to the transferring between computers, flash drives, and the updates to the program I used to write them.

So, while I can guarantee this is the original version, there are a few scenes missing. One major scene from the middle of the story, when Cole comes home covered in blood, cementing Macy’s understanding that he’s a part of something she doesn’t really have any idea of, but soon uncovers what.

This is that diamond in the rough that lived in my head and heart for years, evolving and changing as I did, as my writing did. I wrote this before I learned who I was, and now, well, the rewrite will speak for itself.

I hope you guys enjoy this, and cherish it for years to come.

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